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DarkWingedAngel15
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I'm Waiting...
This is my newest one. I wrote this with another person and it really means alot to me, hope you guys like it, please comment.

"I'm Waiting"
by: SD and KS

(the girl's part)
I sit there by the fountain waiting…
I watch the people pass me by…
You promised you’d come to see me this last time
But is this another one of your deceiving lies?

I’m waiting
Hoping that you’ll be here soon
I’m crying and calling out to you silently
Please come to me soon

(the guy's part)
I see you sitting there crying silently…
I hear you calling out to me quietly
But I stayed where I was, hiding
I don’t know what to do anymore…

I’m waiting…
Hoping that I’d be forgiven
I’m crying and calling out to you silently
Please forgive me for my mistakes…

(the girl's part)
Why am I still waiting for you?
Why do I still look behind my shoulder
When I know you’re not going to be there?
I’m still calling your name as the air gets colder

I’m waiting
Hoping that you’ll be here soon
I’m crying and calling out to you silently
Please come to me soon

(the guy's part)
I should have heard your cries you help, but I didn’t,
Didn’t even see the tears you cried each day
I was so into my own life
That I didn’t see our love slip away

I’m waiting…
Hoping that I’d be forgiven
I’m crying and calling out to you silently
Please forgive me for my mistakes…

(both)
It’s my fault things are this way
If only I had told you how I really felt
Then right now I wouldn’t be alone out in this cold
Is it still too late…?

I stood up and walked away slowly…away from you
I didn’t know that the what I was waiting for
was right there behind me all along…
I was waiting all this time…for you





User Comments: [5]
KiKi_BaByFaCe
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comment Commented on: Sun Aug 06, 2006 @ 05:52am
*cries* Sissy....


comment Commented on: Sun Aug 13, 2006 @ 05:30am
Serena...
;_;

(@Kiara: You called Serena "sissy"... surprised )



Jazminny
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DaLilAsianInvasion
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comment Commented on: Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 01:44am
Dat is so sweet but sad girl! But in a way it semms unrealistic. Well U know wat I mean!


comment Commented on: Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 06:09am
......hmm....yeah. well thanks for the comments guys, appreciate it



DarkWingedAngel15
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DarkChaosDragon15
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comment Commented on: Tue Jan 02, 2007 @ 02:03am
you two did good on this...


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