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DarkWingedAngel15
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 @ 07:06am

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	My Feelings this is a new one of mine just made recently hope you guys enjoy it In the endless rain I continue to walk Retracing my steps from yesterday Remembering the memories The memories of yesterday Still haunts me inside The pain of yesterday Still stabs me from every way The memories of you Continues playing through my mind The song from yesterday Still resounds beside my ears I wander around aimlessly Trying to find my way back Trying to find the answers My heart so yearns for I'm leaving with my tears Buried in beneath me I don't want you to see me in pain I don't want you to see me cry So I'll hold back my tears Pretending that all is fine Telling myself I won't need you I pray for this to be true.....

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LordFenriz
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Commented on: Sun Oct 29, 2006 @ 08:25pm


	I really like it...The Whole keeping the pain inside so noone can see...I can relate to that eek

Commented on: Tue Oct 31, 2006 @ 03:46am


	I know what you mean, I love that. great job girl n.n

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iAlexis4G
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Commented on: Wed Nov 01, 2006 @ 12:43am


	Wow, thats really good! Reminds me of mine kinda

Commented on: Sun Nov 05, 2006 @ 06:51pm


	Serena i really luv the poem its romantic sweet and full of fantasy yet reality....diffrent from the common poem...you should write a book someday...or just write for fun what ever makes u happy!!!

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Jazminny
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Commented on: Thu Nov 09, 2006 @ 04:33am


	Oooh, that's a good one Serena, I always love your poems. 3nodding ...Hmm...you're infecting me with your poems of solitude. All my poems and entries for my English journal is all depressing... stare

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