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Save Me From Myself Sometimes in my life, I get really down and out. I am not sure exactly why, Or exactly what about. Tears just start falling, Tears I can't control. And I feel such pain, Such sadness in my soul. I spend too much time, In the company of only me. And when I am around others, My hurt they cannot see. I keep it all inside, I hide it really well. So they think I am happy, So that they can't tell. But I don't know how much longer, How long I can hang on. I feel at the end of my rope, Most of my hope is gone. And I need you now, More than ever before. To hold my hand, So I feel pain no more. My wings are broken, My soul is torn apart. But you could be the glue, To put together my heart. I need your love, More than anything else. And I need you here, To save me from myself. By: ~Dreams of Eternity~

Posted by: ~Dreams of Eternity~ Tue Jan 30, 2007 @ 03:54pm

My heart is forever locked away within the seals of blood and tears. I am left to wander this earth, alone...

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Commented on: Tue Jan 30, 2007 @ 03:59pm

Commented on: Tue Jan 30, 2007 @ 04:02pm


	Wow!!! I wish I could write like you. crying I love it, Dawn!

`~Lady Kira~`
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~Dreams of Eternity~
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Commented on: Tue Jan 30, 2007 @ 04:05pm


	Anyone can write beautiful poetry...all you have to do is open your heart and soul, then let them pour into your pieces. ^_^

Commented on: Tue Jan 30, 2007 @ 04:06pm

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Commented on: Wed Jan 31, 2007 @ 12:34am


	Well you should tell the people you trust and love must so they can help you and then you will be okay to cry around them and you will feel better. Hey better out then in goes with every.

Commented on: Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 04:56am


	I agree that you only need to open yor heart to have good poetry. But it Depends on the Heart that you open up to the world, That shades the meaning of the words. To a degree that the words themselves change. They can warp to match the Heart that you open up....i'm sorry I have no idea where that came from. The Poetry was Simply fitting...fitting to what? I don't know, But I felt that somehow it was fitting...

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Commented on: Wed Feb 07, 2007 @ 05:13am


	That was really beautiful. I would try to open my heart and soul but I am some how afraid of what might come out.

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