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~Dreams of Eternity~
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Valley of the Fairies

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In the valley of emerald green
Lies a hidden place
A place, to man, that’s rarely seen
Hidden with no trace
Between each tiny blade of grass
Dwells a tiny being
Each with beauty which would surpass
That of any human thing



In the spring they flutter and fly
To each flowering bud
They raise each petal to the sky
And shower them with love
The roses to the blossoming lily
Are nurtured with care
Each seed is planted lovingly
And watched throughout the year



With gentle hands and warms hearts
In the spring each bud blooms
These delightful sights banish dark
And keep the valley from gloom
With butterfly wings and angels’ smiles
They protect the plants and trees
Each sight here is of splendid style
Down in the valley of the fairies

By:
~Dreams of Eternity~






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XxThe LonerxX
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 06:10am
Damn girl...
Everytime I read one of your poems, you always blow me away.
You are going to be one hell of a wonderful poet in the nearing future!


commentCommented on: Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 06:11am
Damn!!! I know this is not your best poem, but it is very beautiful! You are the inspiration! ^_^



Predetermined Fate
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Misfortunate One
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 06:13am
Simply beautiful. You're one talented individual. Your thoughts are so interesting for a fifteen year old. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 06:16am
Wow!!! You are such a wonderful poet and you also have many admirers of your poetry. I love this poem! May I ask a favor of you? Would it be too much trouble for you if you could write a poem for my lil sis's b-day? I'd truly appreciate it. Thanks!!!

`Bitter Rose



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`~Lady Kira~`
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 06:19am
Wow!!! I heart this poem!!! It's soooo beautiful. The picture you put with it goes along wonderfully!!! I can't wait to read more of your grand poetry! heart heart heart


commentCommented on: Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 06:21am
What a beautiful poem, you have here?! The words flow, wonderfully! 3nodding



The Mysterious Wanderer
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~Dreams of Eternity~
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 06:26am
I'd love to write a poem for your little sister, Rose! I'll have it finished a little later on, tonight. ^^


commentCommented on: Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 06:27am
Yes your, words do indeed flow wonderfully! And the picture fits perfictly with the poem itself!



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Bitter Rose
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 06:31am
Oh, thank you, thank you!!! I highly appreciate it!!! ^^


commentCommented on: Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 06:32am
Of course!!!



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megatokyo11
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commentCommented on: Wed Feb 07, 2007 @ 05:18am
I could not find the words to say. It looks like what ever I would say wouldnt mean anything because they have all said it.


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