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Here is where I may put some of my poems, and maybe even a story or two. If you read them plaese comment to tell me what I need to work on, or how you think i did. Thanks.
Dont Go (poem)
You act like your crazy,
But you say its ok.
I know your not, dont try to fool me,
Your not "ok" as you say.

I've seen this before,
And so have you.
Why do you deny it?
Maybe because there's nothing you can do.

I really hope thats not the case,
I hope you dont have what I think.
I'm praying right now,
That all you need is a good wash in the sink.

I dont want to lose anyone else,
You have to pull through.
If anything happened to you,
I dont know what I'd do.

I dont want to be alone again,
It's happened too many times.
Your way too important,
Not worth just a few dimes.

If anything happens to you,
I just want you to know.
That I love you with all my heart,
And I hope you dont have to go.






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AliceMarquette
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 17, 2007 @ 01:23am
omg thats so sad and so sweet i love ti Angie i need poetry tips from you when im depressed. i love it so much who's it dedicated to ??


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 05:50am
Another good one. I like the last three verses.



Gryphex
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