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Here is where I may put some of my poems, and maybe even a story or two. If you read them plaese comment to tell me what I need to work on, or how you think i did. Thanks.
Friendship or Love? (Poem)
I dont know how to say this,
It's really quite hard for me.
I know you dont know whats going on,
But here, I'll try to say it so you can see.

You and I have been friends for a while,
And I'm realy glad that we met.
I just think that we should go further than that,
Well that's really up to you to set.

You probably get the concept now,
But I'll try to say it anyway.
I like you alot, you know more than normal,
And I was hoping that we might go out one day.

I know that was probably a shock to you,
And you probably don't know what to say.
I don't blame you one bit,
I just hope I get your answer before May.

Or if you know already then tell me,
I won't be mad or anything I promise you.
I probably know the answer anyway,
But hope it will be something new.

If you dont like me back then I understand,
I didnt really expect you to.
I just hope that you don't think I'm weird or anything,
And that we can be friends just like we used to.






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Harcore_Muffin
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commentCommented on: Thu Feb 22, 2007 @ 07:12am
Saaawwweeeeettt youve gotten hella better at writing poems...I like it....go to my blogs on myspace and Ill show you how much I like it.


commentCommented on: Wed Feb 28, 2007 @ 01:18am
i feel contempt with this one i cant quite get feeling from it



AliceMarquette
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