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Here is where I may put some of my poems, and maybe even a story or two. If you read them plaese comment to tell me what I need to work on, or how you think i did. Thanks.
How about us? (Poem) continuation to " Friendship or Love?"
Have you thought about it yet?
Have you thought about it at all?
It's been a long time since I've asked you,
I even kept quiet at the mall.

I just want you to know that I care,
I'll still care whether were friends or more.
Im sorry I'm putting stress on you,
And I hope your not pressured to the core.

I only wish I could read your mind,
Then this wouldn't be so hard.
I could, I wouldn't have asked you in the first place,
Depending on what answer was on the card.

The reason I did was because I love you alot,
And because I thought I had a chance.
Who knows? Maybe I still do,
Maybe I'll get asked to the dance.

But, if it's the other way around,
Then I completely understand.
I just hope you realize how much I need you,
And how much I want you by my side in the sand.






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Harcore_Muffin
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commentCommented on: Thu Feb 22, 2007 @ 07:17am
I dont like it....not because you did a bad job on it but because it reminds me of Sebastian.... cry


commentCommented on: Wed Feb 28, 2007 @ 01:17am
wow... this ones sad angie but i understand it greatly ^^ and i hope that makes you feel good or ill send fishes to eat you



AliceMarquette
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