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  • Title: Kitamura meet the angels
  • Artist: Ofallthings
  • Description: ok, so this might be a person in a manga i hope to make (>.<) and i know something's wrong, but don't know what. (except the arms. i know the arms are wrong) Plz comment and rate, criticism NEEDED to help me make this pic better. plz give tips!
  • Date: 08/11/2010
  • Tags: kitamura meet angels
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • TranscendantShadows - 12/21/2010
  • Cutting the image into parts I would say that overall it is well drawn, I think the issue is mostly in the way the parts fit together. The "scale" from head to body is off, not the neck. The arms could be a bit thicker, but I like their shape. Nice job on the hair too.
  • Blades_VS_Guns - 10/10/2010
  • Well, for me the neck width is fine but its abit 2 long, n yea d bottom half is abit too small
    2 me(I dun tink many ppl share dis opinion), d mouth is 2 near d chin
    Other than tat, it's v good
  • Ehi Adesso - 09/24/2010
  • The torso is amazing. You're right the arms are a bit off. I would suggest lengthening the part above the elbow and making them wider. In my opinion, the neck is a bit too wide for the rest of the body, and the legs are too short and close together. They shouldn't be so straight.
  • kjd564 - 08/11/2010
  • I like it ....I think the bottom half (waist and lower) is a bit disproportional, like its to small for the rest of the body.....hope that helps ^^
 
 
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