- by Nobody May Tell |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: The Middle School Life
- Artist: Nobody May Tell
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Description:
This is my OC and how I would imagine her school life
Please criticize me D:
I have to fix some details of the picture anyway - Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: middle school life anime
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Comments (4 Comments)
- White~Tear~Chiffy - 12/01/2008
- You did great on the people in the background. the desks were also done magnificently. I love the character with his head on the desk. his expression is priceless. oh, another thing. I think the collar thing would be a little more to her right. but our left. I also love the leaves. I can't draw backgrounds... well, I don't know. I haven't really tried. I love this drawing. 5/5, definitely! This is The Best drawing I've seen in this arena! good job!
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- White~Tear~Chiffy - 12/01/2008
- the arm is pretty good. still, though, the hand is too small. try to make the hand the height from the chin to mid-forehead. and wide enough to cover half the face. that's how I proportion the hands I draw.
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- Tradorian - 12/01/2008
- the arm laying on the desk looks a bit short or too thin, it kinda looks awkward. other than that's it's pretty good :] 4/5
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- x0x0carmen0x0x - 11/30/2008
- o.o how is it possible for me to criticize u? its such a beautiful drawing i'm sorry but i'm giving it a 5/5 but u can always try to improve it ur way ^^
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