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I smell the cripsness in the air
I know white gold will be there
outside, where I might find
something to please every kind
of person who is near and far
here on Earth or on a star
Snow is the thing that we should love
it comes from our cold air above.
Who denies it's cold touch?
Who would think it's too much?
It's not a burdon on our chest
To have it, we are very blessed!
You don't see children play in rain,
people think that's a pain.
You don't see children play in sleet,
even cars aren't on the street.
You don't see children play in hail,
the very sight makes us pale.
So, next time you see the snow
there is somewhere you should go
It's called 'outside', in case you've heard
So go there now, you lazy turd!
- Title: Appreciate The Snowflakes
- Artist: nicolebsb
- Description: This is my poem about snoflakes and how some people don't appreciate them like they should. xP
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: snowflakes winter good cool cold
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sabaism - 02/08/2010
- Better than what I've read so far, but it could do without the last stanza.
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- yes i know im sexy - 07/31/2009
- wat is this
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- yummiinmytummi - 04/16/2009
- i like the turd part (: this poem is awesome!
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- patrick765 - 03/15/2009
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Wow Rhyming words Hahaha Lol
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- miley8120 - 02/01/2009
- very well written... this is i think the best poem!! biggrin u should win it .... though i hope it has been written by Nicolebsb (the poet) and not done cheating by copying this poem from sumwhere..... well best of luck i am sure it will win actually 97% sure smile smile smile lol
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- vellvatein - 12/30/2008
- thats funny-ish, i'll give you a 4/5.
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- BeaniesFTW - 12/28/2008
- Very good. Rhyme, rhythm, everything. 5/5.
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