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I smell the cripsness in the air
I know white gold will be there
outside, where I might find
something to please every kind
of person who is near and far
here on Earth or on a star
Snow is the thing that we should love
it comes from our cold air above.
Who denies it's cold touch?
Who would think it's too much?
It's not a burdon on our chest
To have it, we are very blessed!
You don't see children play in rain,
people think that's a pain.
You don't see children play in sleet,
even cars aren't on the street.
You don't see children play in hail,
the very sight makes us pale.
So, next time you see the snow
there is somewhere you should go
It's called 'outside', in case you've heard
So go there now, you lazy turd!
- Title: Appreciate The Snowflakes
- Artist: nicolebsb
- Description: This is my poem about snoflakes and how some people don't appreciate them like they should. xP
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: snowflakes winter good cool cold
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Comments (3 Comments)
- picturepurfectmemories - 12/23/2008
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wow, that was awesome.
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- nouvella - 12/18/2008
- I just skimmed it, but after the last line I had to give it 5 stars.
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- Sakura lady of death - 12/17/2008
- This poem equals=WONDERFUL! :3 I especially like the way you ended it, but overall what really got me besides the eloquence of your words, but the fact is, this is the so far the best poem in the contest. :3 Good luck and feel free to rate back. :3
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