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snow falls through the wind to the ground.
the snow continues through the trees.
the green grass no longer shows but now gone by the white blanket of snow.
the snow is as the fingerprints of the wether.
one flake unidenticle to the others.
- by drewscot94 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/02/2008 |
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- Title: snow
- Artist: drewscot94
- Description: what i think when i see snow.
- Date: 12/02/2008
- Tags: snow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Dani-X - 01/25/2010
- a child cud have done better
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- anonymous678 - 06/18/2009
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its really pretty smile
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- rainbow sk8ter - 04/19/2009
- i dont like it sorry
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- xXLoveeABoy993Xx - 04/13/2009
- 1st it doesnt ryhm and 2nd dont get it!
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- gangstaboss21 - 03/17/2009
- don't get it
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 02/22/2009
- Cliche, unoriginal, and weak. Has grammatical and spelling errors.
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- arale43 - 01/21/2009
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???
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