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My heart beats quickly
When he is near.
My breath quickens
As he looks my way.
I have known him for years,
My best friend.
Oh how I long to fall into his embrace
To feel his lips upon mine.
I waited too long to tell him how I feel.
Now he holds his girl close to him.
I wish that was me,
Feeling his breath on my skin,
His voice soft as he whispers in my ear.
But it’s not me, I’m not his girl.
I waited so long,
It’s too late,
Much too late.
I wonder if I will ever get the chance to tell him,
“I love you”
- by TigressWarrior |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Too Late
- Artist: TigressWarrior
- Description: A secret love for one's best friend, but unable to ever tell him, for it may ruin their friendship.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: secretcrush bestfriend
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Darkia Inuchi - 12/21/2009
- Wow, that's a good poem. Ever thought about publishing? sweatdrop
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- hiphopspice - 12/28/2008
- its so nice is it true comment back on my profile bye!
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- Renee the Rabid Squirrel - 12/24/2008
- Well, that's nice that you had it as an assignment, but the big problem I see with this poem is that it's not a holiday poem. This contest is for holiday poems. Please read the rules before submitting your schoolwork without giving any regard to the theme.
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- TigressWarrior - 12/15/2008
- Also, this poem was an assignment in my creative writing class. She gave us topics, I choose this one, a secret crush or something.
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- TigressWarrior - 12/15/2008
- Poetry doesn't have to rhyme. My poem is freestyle.
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- Piano Kisses - 12/15/2008
- This is sweet and everything, but very cliche. It doesn't rhyme either, which throws off the flow since you didn't keep anything with syllables the same either. Try doing more than the norm smile
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