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Snow has gone
Beneath the rays of sun.
Frosty left with no goodbyes.
The grass crawls out
And cries to the sun
"I want to live!"
The human hybernation
Is forced to come to an end.
Forced to move,
To LIVE again,
To BREATH again.
I smile,
The warmth is nice.
I frown,
As I think
"I'll miss the excuse,
to cuddle close to you."
Comments (4 Comments)
- N3N3_Sug3r - 07/23/2009
- That was awsome!
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- Reya Dawn - 02/23/2009
- That's really cute. I like your use of poetry devices. Human hybernation is genius.
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- Amunankhage - 01/17/2009
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Intriguing! I like that you used human hybernation, and also
gave the romantic quote in the end... Really makes you miss your
companions, and despise your daily occupation.... Exellent work! - Report As Spam
- aleeya123 - 01/09/2009
- that...was...BEAUTIFUL!:cry happily:
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