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A little girl, on a path;
Yes she was there, on that path.
The path was endless;
But still she went forward;
She was walking down that icy path;
All alone, on that icy path.
And it was snowing, ever so lightly;
But she was all alone, on that icy path.
Still she kept going;
Down that icy path.
Because she knew;
When she came home;
The icy path would still be there;
But she would be home, and it would be Christmas.
- by Itstimeforsun |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: The Icy Path
- Artist: Itstimeforsun
- Description: This is a poem i wrote, because sometimes I feel like that girl, all alone, but when you come home, it would go away.
- Date: 12/13/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Faerie - 10/09/2009
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Too repetitive
Font is too big.
I dont understand it really, where is the christmas spirit??? - Report As Spam
- Zynd the Lucky - 06/29/2009
- icy path, meet icy jaye LOL!!! nice poem, kinda repetitive.
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- foxyfoxy123456 - 12/30/2008
- The icy path seems kind of long. I would hate to walk that far.
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- The Lazy Powm - 12/20/2008
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thats kinda sad
but i can relate - Report As Spam
- meow2933 - 12/15/2008
- I feel like that sometimes too.
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