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Heat arising
In the fire, crackling.
Snow banging,
against the front door.
No carols being sung,
but stockings being hung
No sugarplums dancing
and no rats fighting.
The peacefulness is too still
only thoughts swim and no words spoken.
In hopes that their father will awoken.
It's been a year,
their eyes never clear
at the thought of him, being away.
The mother hugs the children
and starts to pray.
That her husband will come home with no delay.
She looks over at the tree,
so lonely and empty,
yet there are presents underneath thee.
She sends the children up to bed,
while turning out the lights.
Until the sound of a phone startles her in surprise.
She sits there instead
and begins to cry.
She will never forget this Christmas Eve,
no matter how hard she will try.
- by coldfrenzy |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Just a phone call
- Artist: coldfrenzy
- Description: So this poem basically is about a mother with two kids whose husband is fighting in Iraq and was supposed to be coming home for Christmas. I wrote this poem because there are people out there [here in america] who this happens to. I didn't right this as a rant or anything of that such, but just as poem that pretty much relates to those people. The title just follows the whole "i'm sorry but so and so got shot" and how that one phone call can just ruin someone's heart or day, etc.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: love christmas iraq fighting home
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Comments (5 Comments)
- CherryFlavoredDeodorant - 07/01/2010
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- jeremyyalev2-9 - 01/09/2010
- awesome! 5/5
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- xxneonxnightxlifexx - 07/03/2009
- awww! i love it! im about to cry! 5/5 all the way biggrin
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- BeaniesFTW - 12/28/2008
- Nice job, but you could've made it rhyme consistantly to keep the rhythm. Still, I'll give you a 5/5.
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