-
Christmas is here nice and chill u
look around for what u want u open
your things and be nice for what u got
or next year u won/t get nothin but coal
so happy holidays to everyone and have a great new year 3nodding
- by CHAO-LIN OF THE 3 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
- Skip
- Title: christmas
- Artist: CHAO-LIN OF THE 3
- Description: sweet
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: christmas
- Report Post
Comments (7 Comments)
- julie196 - 07/02/2009
- It'd be more good if ya'll used them english correctly, ya'll. It'd make u be smarterer. LOL!
- Report As Spam
- Butterfly Linda - 06/15/2009
- use proper writting please
- Report As Spam
- tana skatin cutie - 05/05/2009
- not bad
- Report As Spam
- cherryblossom_ninja20 - 04/12/2009
- ummmmmm. like she said maybe if you put a little more heart into it but no i really do like it and good job!!!!!=)
- Report As Spam
- Scary Kidz - 03/29/2009
-
4-5
you need to try a lil harder!!! Besides thats, its pretty cool!!! - Report As Spam
- ObsessionIsSuchAnUglyWord - 02/16/2009
- Um, this is a poetry contest, so maybe you should use proper grammer, not lol speak. 1/5
- Report As Spam
- lacblue - 12/28/2008
- ok
- Report As Spam