- Title: Ghost of Sorrow
- Artist: Finoewae
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Description:
"My heart chased after pain
It knew from a fond memory,
A time of hurt and depth
When I could see eternity.
My eyes chased after tears
They'd cried from a cold tragedy,
One breath of hope and love
Before the loss of destiny.
It seems my being craves
The scars my life has given me,
Forever on I drift
Back through a mind of ebony."
(Thanks so much for the feedback, let me know if the poem I wrote helped explain my entry!)
~ artwork by Madhubala. ^^ - Date: 07/23/2009
- Tags: ghost sorrow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Finoewae - 08/01/2009
- Thank you so much! ^o^
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- Tora Tenma - 08/01/2009
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I never vote on avi's I never comment on them, but this one is beautiful.
5/5 - Report As Spam
- Suicidal Paper - 08/01/2009
- It's quite lovely. The poem was good as well helping to explain your entry. 5/5
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- Namikaze Kaiyoko - 07/31/2009
- the poem is beautiful... as for the image... the only thing I could see that you could add from the ref. is the staff of angles. But it still looks good without it!
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- iMiriku - 07/31/2009
- 5/5 perfect!
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- Finoewae - 07/31/2009
- Thank you so much! And I'm glad you like my poem. ^o^
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- Aiko Katserugi - 07/31/2009
- wow. Not only was the poem inspiring, but it did a very good job of explaining your entry. I must say, your avatar has a glorious amount of flow and is really beautiful. 5/5
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