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The girl at the window stared at the figure sitting under the tree with a lovesick expression on her face as she held the pencil in her right hand. It was nearly the end of the school year and she still had not talked to him. She was still staring at him from afar as he continued to walk by her as if she never existed. The girl sighed in sorrow as her words began to appear on paper,
As I am to say, I, Miss Lotto....Am stuck in a lovesick illness that is yet to be cured of. I am forever stuck watching him from afar as he goes on through life. I am so pathetic am I not?
Miss Lotto, that was the name she had come up with as she wrote in her notebook. It was a far shot away from her real name, Iris Revine. Iris frowned at her reflection, her name didn't match her at all. Iris belonged to a girl with bright colored hair and eyes with a glowing personality, not to a girl like her. Why should a girl with long dark brown hair, dull gray eyes hidden behind glasses, and always wearing plain long dark colored dresses have a name like Iris? Iris peered out the window just in time to see him stand up and step out into the sunlight, "He's so perfect...."
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The boy stared up into the sky as the laughter and chatter around him consumed his thoughts. To be outside on a day like this was refreshing, but with it being this loud it was annoying. He looked down at his sketchbook at his latest drawing.
A girl smiled back at him, her long hair blew around her as she stood on a hill covered in flowers. Her eyes shined with life as her glasses were held in place by her hands. He smiled back at her and quickly placed the title, 'Perfect Day,' under it with Mr. Nameless.
However, Mr. Nameless had a name. It was Nathan. Common and boring Nathan who never spoke a word to anyone. He didn't mind what they said about him. He glanced up at the windows of the library just in time to see her gather her things and run off.
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Iris was so late! She had promised the teacher to have set up the chemicals for the Chemistry class lab! Stupid her, she wasn't focused enough!! Iris slid down the stair railing before landing perfectly on her feet before dashing around the corner, "OW!! OH MY!!"
"Watch it!" Her glasses flew off her face as her notebook, Miss Lotto's notebook, flung straight into the face of the person she crashed into. "Oh, forgive me!" Iris scrambled to reach her glasses and helped the person up, "I'm so clumsy forgive me!" Without waiting for a reply, Iris grabbed her notebook back before returning to her mad dash towards her class next period.
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Nathan rubbed his face, "Ow, ow....Girls should be more careful," he groaned as he bent down to pick up the notebook of his drawings. It was a pain to even blink for goodness sake! He opened the book to look over his latest drawing,
He's always drawing in that sketchbook. I know his drawings are beyond the skills of any famous artist in the history books.
Wait a second! This wasn't his book!! Nathan flipped the pages only to find a multiple use of the name 'Miss Lotto' in every single entry, "So that would mean...That girl who I rammed into..Has my...Oh great!!" The girl who crashed into him had his notebook! "I need to find that person....Before she ruins my love life!!"
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Iris listened as her teacher went on about how chemical reactions could take place when they took a compound to the bunser burner, she sighed. It was a complete waste of energy for her to run here since the teacher changed her mind again. She quietly took out her pen and opened the notebook only to see a picture of her, "W-What the...." She flipped the page to find the title, 'Laughing Iris by Mr. Namless.' She panicked and tried to find at least a page to which her entries were. None.
She blushed furiously, who owned this notebook?! Mr. Nameless was on every drawing. "So....If I have Mr. Nameless' sketchbook....," she gasped in horror, "Than that means he has my Miss Lotto notebook!"
"Iris? Care to explain what are you panicking about?"
"N-Nothing ma'am!!!"
Iris felt like crying, who had her notebook?!
- by RoseKnight101 |
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- | Submitted on 03/21/2009 |
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- Title: Don't You Love me?
- Artist: RoseKnight101
- Description: A shy girl falls in love with a quiet boy who also seems to admire her, but they have never spoken to each other. The girl writes out her feelings in a notebook using the name 'Miss Lotto' as the boy draws out pictures of her in a sketchbook naming himself, 'Mr. Nameless.' What if they accidently switch books?
- Date: 03/21/2009
- Tags: dont love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Colin Singleton - 07/12/2013
- Beforehand I'll warn you I'm a grouch, so don't take my words too seriously. But the idea is a bit generic for me. Your writing style is great for essays but I don't feel any uniqueness to it, I don't really seem to see YOU. It's nice to see niches of the author in a book and I don't think you use enough voice. I was wondering if you would like to peer edit with me? Send me a PM if you're willing.
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- Vodka Billy - 11/20/2010
- more!!i love it it is awesome. it would be a cute book. i can imagin it in stores best sellers. or a manga that would be soo cute ^^. its soo awesome. i love books stories liek these they keep wanting to make you read more!!
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- LooneyLunaLove - 09/01/2009
- Dudeee More!:]]]]]
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- Greeneroo - 06/03/2009
- More, More MORE!!!
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- ii-MidnightAngel-ii - 06/03/2009
- moooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee please
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- a_VAMPire-s_deAth_KIss - 06/03/2009
- Write more! Please? I'm a sucker for romance, but also kinda cynical towards it... xD
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- Chomp Chomp Dead - 03/21/2009
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oh noo Mr.Nameless and Miss Lotto hav eachothers notebooks.O.o oooo
lol Iris must feel like she has a stalker XD - Report As Spam