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Once upon a time there was a girl named Alex.She was a wizard girl.Whatever she wants is your command. She was a polite little girl until it was exposed. She grew invisible arms on her back. She was born with cat ears on her head,but they weren't soft,they were hard. Her parents died,leaving her alone when she was 6. Alex was cursed when she was 8. She stared at a cursed gyroid to turn into an evil spirit cursed she commanded the world to be in her command. And if anyone did anything wrong,she can just burn you to ashes.Alex would not follow anyone elses rules.Or else if they argued with her,you should know this happens...they burn.Soon she burned everyone the curse was still kept on the gyroid she looked at it once more.Her blood stream and veins burned so much she was confused just to destroy herself burning.Alex was never exposed once more.Her horns and arms dissapeared.She was normal.She hid away the gyroid forever until her death.The curse held onto her in her grave.But at the funeral,it wasn't exposed.But whoever looked at the cursed gyroid,they will burn.It was all the curse who destroyed her manners,and the people.
OMG THIS IS NOT MY STORY PEOPLE!WHY CANT U READ THE COMMENT I POSTED?????????JANK THIS!
- Title: Curse Of The Ancient Gyroid
- Artist: Miles 127
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Description:
Here's a story about a girl who did almost anything.She was a Wizard Girl.
Whatever she wants,is your command.
I got the idea from Wizards of Waverly Place and Elfen Lied.
MY WEIRD COUSIN MADE IT BUT THEY MADE IT ON MY PROFILE!!!!FACT!!! - Date: 07/19/2008
- Tags: coolstory
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ji-Eun - 09/23/2008
- Your story was difficult to follow. It lacked taste and obviously, originality..
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- lazylama2 - 09/20/2008
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It was unoriginal as pointed out by other people and also wizard girl? Aren't they called witches? This also did not make a lot of sense...If you thought out your ideas and came up with something more original I think you would be able to do better, and also clearly mark it up so it does not jump so much.
Also mentioned try not to start with 'Once upon a time...' - Report As Spam
- Fakku Boy - 08/21/2008
- i agree, dont start the story with "once upon a time"...
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- Kei Chikurin - 08/16/2008
- ....really good.......
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- DarkPixian - 07/21/2008
- ELFEN LIED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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