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Water filled my lungs as the crushing waves slammed my soaked body like a ragdoll against the slippery rock of the ocean. I could feel the painful bruises gathering like storm clouds on my battered back and every water filled breath I took only made the pain more excruciating. I didn't know how long I had been trapped in this watery grave but time was hard to tell when you could feel your consciousness slipping away as fast as the water rushed into my open mouth.
The water stung my eyes as it rushed by and my fingers were numb with the icy water as the cold seeped into my skin and chilled my breaking bones. I could see the setting sun's reflection glistening faintly on the shaken surface of the sea. The light danced lightly and freely like a child, without a care in the world. I wished I could be that free and in between the malignant blows from the rocks and waves I wondered why my short life had to end in this cruel way.
The rock slammed against my back yet again and I grabbed at the sharp, jutting rocks. My hand slipped and the last sight I saw before all went black was the crimson water, red with my blood.
- by Mischiefwulf |
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- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: Drowning
- Artist: Mischiefwulf
- Description: Few of us have ever experienced the feeling of complete helplessness when water overcomes. I have never felt that feeling either and have no desire too but have attempted to capture the feeling as accuratley as I could. Enjoy! Please leave honest comments. Everyone is entitled to their oppinion.
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: drowning water helpless helplessness ocean
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Comments (3 Comments)
- CrystalDragon15 - 01/02/2009
- You know, I had an almost drowning experience like that. O.O
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- Fayne Darkness - 12/29/2008
- wow close to my experience... awesomes
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- bees and knees - 12/29/2008
- Wow. Descriptive. Wow. I never thought of drowning like that...
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