You Pushed Me Away

• Artist: kannair
• Description: read and comment on my poetry
• Date: 04/23/2009
• Tags: pushed away love

i reached for you
but you pushed me away
as i went falling
into my own heart's decay

pounding and screaming
to be set free
to escape this place
caged in misery

drowning in heartache
plunged into my own fears
thus where you left me
crying rivers of tears

i reached for your love
but it turned its back
slowly bringing my heart
to an unsealable crack

reality has stricken me
with a mighty blow
making me realize how
life could be so cold

trapped within a box
my memories are shaken
but keep in mind
vengeance has not yet awaken

Comments

[Sugar Quill Drops]

It certainly gets better as you read it, as the beginning isn't very strong. But shouldn't this be in the poetry section?

[Sub-_-Reign]

Very nice, I think i will check the rest of your work.

[Master Of All Devdawg]

very sad but amazing

[lefty_7]

oh, so very, sad

[tana_loves_him]

This reminds me of what im going through . . .

[Kikyo Demon of Fire]

i wonder why you wrote this...
But i still like it.