- As he got closer, my legs began to tremble more, and my memory seemed to be erased. Why was he coming closer? A blurred vision overcame me as I stumbled backwards, and fell upon a dull knife. I could feel hot, crimson liquid coat itself on my back, smearing the hidden tattoo that said his name. I listened closer, for I knew I was fainting, and I couldn't miss what else would become of me through silent echoes. My eyes widened, and I seemed to awaken from an internal smumber as he placed a gun by my head. "You think you can outsmart me with your foolish matrimony?" He carefully, gracefully slid my wedding ring off my blood-rusted finger. He brought it close to his eyes so to study the engravement: "Forever shall we be, forever shall we love," he read. A sick smile slid upon his lips. I tried to scream, but he forced the gun down upon a pressure point on my neck. "One sound, and I'll kill you..." his eyes were pure rage. He looked out the window at the rising sun, and stared at me with pure, undying hatred. Suddenly, I was cold, I was numb, and I was asleep...
- by The Epic Roxas |
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- | Submitted on 05/31/2010 |
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- Title: Crimson
- Artist: The Epic Roxas
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Description:
A small segment from an old poem of mine ^-^
Heheh...well...this is my first submission here :whee: So I hope you enjoy :cute: - Date: 05/31/2010
- Tags: crimson backgroundsketch marriage death blood
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Rawr Loves Yew - 06/23/2011
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Really Good :3
Although, I don't see it as a poem,
But more as writing..
None the less 5/5 - Report As Spam
- CaptnCuddles - 01/10/2011
- totally eptic meh frend.....totally eptic....
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- estatik - 01/09/2011
- love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- B1ttersweet - 01/01/2011
- ohmygod... this is amazing..
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- darktank72 - 01/01/2011
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It good, i can really picture it
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- cindylovestim - 10/30/2010
- I love it it's amazing
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