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hello this is the last scene of a play that i wrote
the basic story so far is that these 3 people who are best friends get into a big fight with an evil person and one of there best friends is in a hospital and the friend is dying. the three main characters have students called hinata, kiba and shouji. the three main characters also have teachers called oraiya, itachi and obito. they are all ninjas and are at the second highest rank of 4 level jounin. elle, alex and rachel are the main characters and elle is about to have a fight between teneska and herself. teneska is the sister of elle's best friend who she killed 5 years ago by accident. elle thinks she deserves to die because she killed him.and now elle is waiting for teneska to kill her.
i hope you enjoy it and please leave a comment, even if you only read part of it. please be relatively blunt and ingnore grammer mistakes and incase your wondering, yes i did get most of the characters of of naruto because all the names in naruto are cool
Elle: now would you like me to fight you or would you like me to just stand here and let you kill me
Teneska: just stand there
Elle: ok(just before elle is stabbed she looks over at alex and says) wait, sorry but I’m afraid I can’t go down that easily to you, I have to fight to die with honour
Teneska: why do you care, you only cared about lives, never honour
Elle: true but a friend of mine cares about honour so I will die with honour to make my death happier to her
Teneska: what makes you think you’ll die
Elle: I won’t let myself live, I will die with honour but I will not die by your choice I will die by my own choice
Teneska: let’s fight I can’t stand your crap why the hell did my brother like you
(teneska and elle fight and talk at the same time)
Elle: he didn’t like me, he loved me
(teneska shouts)
Teneska: no he didn’t don’t lie
Elle: he did love me, but I didn’t love him
Teneska: you hurt my brother before you killed him, why, why do bring so much suffering to my brother, if he loved you why didn’t you love him
Elle: I just didn’t but time can change things, I care for him now more than ever
Teneska: that doesn’t mean anything he’s dead, you b***h once your dead I’ll kill for friends for this and make you truly suffer, I’ll half kill you and then I’ll make you watch me kill your best friends
Elle: if that’s what you intend to do then I’m not in any way sorry to say that I will kill you, I want my friends by my side when I die, so you can’t killl them and I want them to live to complete there dreams, asriel forgive me
(elle stabs teneska right through the chest, teneska’s eyes widen and then fall, teneska just lies on elle’s sword, elle looks at her lower chest and realises that she was hit with teneska’s sword, she falls)
(alex and Rachel run over to elle as she falls, they hold elle‘s head up with a look of horror on there faces as they cry)
Elle: hmm, how great I just realised The teachers in your life have not been the people you saw as teachers. teachers have been the people that led you down your path to good or bad, a very simple job in actuality all they do is play a game called follow the leader with you. Thank you for playing follow the leader with me, it was fun, now it’s just you. But some else will play with you and you will forget about me.
Rachel: no we won’t, well always remember you (Rachel is about to say something else)
EllE: (she interrupts)no, please I want you to forget about me, I want to be left, don’t dwel on me, your too precious to this world to do that. Your wanted for others so you can lead them, without a leader it’s not follow the leader. And without follow the leader then the game of who we are will never finish.
Alex: stop Rachel she’s going there’s nothing to do, move on with your life and, and(Alex starts to cry) don’t let death affect you, you’ll become stronger.
Rachel: (Rachel shouts at alex) stronger, stronger you don’t look very strong
Alex: I know
(they start to cry ellen starts to close her eyes an says)
Elle: I feel strong. Death Is strong. I’m happy.( elle closes her eyes for the last time)
(teneska makes one last stab at elle just before teneska dies, alex stands up and defends elle’s dead body)
Alex: no let her have her peace now(Alex is stabed while defending elle’s body alex then starts to bleed blood out of her mouth.then Rachel grabs elle’s blood stained sword and stabs teneska then alex falls)
Rachel: no, no don’t not you, please I can’t lead, I need you both I’ll die too if (she is intrupted by alex)
Alex: shut up cry baby, what kind of person can’t follow the leader,believe that our death is a good thing and you’ll never move on .believe that our deaths are a bad thing and anger and sorrow will push you to move on.
Rachel: I don’t want to move on I want to live like this, iv’e moved on enough I deserve to not move on anymore.
Alex: no you don’t your needed too much in this world but if you keep believing that you deserve not too move on then it’ll become true because you won’t be useful anymore, don’t be a coward, move on and live. Be happy because of who you are not because of what has happened to you, I’m not completing my dream, you all told me I would complete my dream but I didn’t did I?
Rachel: you completed our dreams, you let us live and die happily (at this point Rachel looks over at elle.)
Alex: yeah but my dreams I wanted to die by my own will (alex slumps and closes her eyes, Rachel starts to shout)
Rachel: you did complete your dream idiot you died by your own will
(Alex opens her eyes slowly)
Alex: so I did thanks for reminding me I’m sorry (a pause) for not saying that I always believed that you reminded me of a (a pause) toe.
Rachel: b***h, I’ll see you in a few years
Alex: I hope not (alex slumps for the last time)
(Itachi, oriaya and obito arrive along with shouji hinata and kiba, without saying anything oraiya picks up Elle and obito picks up alex, then hinata sees Elle’s fourth level jounin jacket as they walk away then she looks in Elle’s pocket and it’s a letter addressed to hinata. She reads it out
Hinata: dear hinata I want you to know how special you are to me. I never saw a ninja in you until I saw the will in your heart when you defended kimi against everyone. You have something in you that your family had. You have an amazing will against those who follow everything in this world and accept it the way it is. When everyone else hated kimi you were secretly pushing him on. He knew this. You will always be who you are no matter what anyone says. You never needed anyone to lead you, you played follow the leader all by yourself, you are the only person with this, do what you want in your life you will succeed and although I will not see this. You will forever have this. I care for you because I want to be at your side when you succeed and in my death I will succeed thIs.
By your side by Rachel’s side by everyone I care for’s side until they die and join me at other people’s side. By sides forever till I have everyone by my side in death.
Narrator: they both died at the side of there friends. So a happy ending like all the fairy tales you have read, just a less conventional happy ending than the fairy tales.
- by Ms Make Me Smile |
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- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: death of the brave
- Artist: Ms Make Me Smile
- Description: ok bad title i know, this is the last scene in a play that i wrote, the main characters are based on me and my friends, hope you like it.oh yeah and its got a naruto thing to it but i dont think its very much like naruto at all, oh yeah and remember its a play so imagining it in your head might help.
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: naruto srdsakura deathofthebrave
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Summer Fallwinterspring - 01/09/2009
- Originality. You may have heard of it? Why so obsessed with Japanese culture? Don't be such a weeabo, and don't rip off anime (anime! Of all things!) so much.
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- SomeAnotherDay - 07/16/2008
- nice, I think u could've came up with ur own names, rather then most of the characters from naruto though. overall, it's good. 4/5
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