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Looking At You
Years, has it not been,
Since I have admired you?
All you have been, is a desire,
And dreams, is only where you and I are one.
From dawn break, you are who I think of.
Whilst I view you from afar,
I marvel at the sensation you brought about.
The rainbows, the smiles,
A sight for the eyes, it was.
If a trance, you were,
Not to wake up, is what I desire.
Since, this is reality,
Face it, is what I must do.
I was falling, once upon a time,
Now, I am but falling apart
Another, is whom you belong,
But, happy, do I see you,
Hence, I feel the happiness you feel,
And I shall have to let go.
To love you in secrecy is what I chose.
For in secrecy, nobody owns you, but me.
- by Lt Honeybee |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 09/28/2008 |
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- Title: Looking At You
- Artist: Lt Honeybee
- Description: I was...admiring someone.
- Date: 09/28/2008
- Tags: looking love hurt agony
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Comments (5 Comments)
- SpAz-FLIPPING-TaStIc - 05/04/2009
- Totally relatable. Love it.
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- vampiress911 - 09/28/2008
- Not bad. I like it for the most part.
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- xXsam-i-amXx - 09/28/2008
- Really Really awesome. cause i can relate ^_^
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- papershelf i c i c l e s - 09/28/2008
- very good. i like it. is that a "total eclipse of the heart" reference i sense? XD good job. kudos.
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- Linus7 - 09/28/2008
- That was outstanding to read. You probably shouldn't use the words "hence" or "whilst". It kind of ruins the story. Fine work though.
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