execution

• Artist: romancer88
• Description: the ending of an innocent mans life
• Date: 10/06/2008
• Tags: execution

"Hey!! Get up its time"
"i slowly got up and walked over to the prison guard as he cuffed me and walked me down the hall, i was really not sure what to think of the situation i was in,i was scared maybe or no.. maybe i was acatually happy... i wasnt sure i knew one thing for sure and thats that im innocent but they couldnt delay the execution any longer.
"Hey you you got some last minute visitors"
"As i looked up my family was standing there in tears, but all i could do was smile while tearing,as he told me it was time to go i turned around and said don't worry im innocent and when i get to god he'll open his arms to me and say welcome... so don't be sad i love you all dearly and i will be watching you all, my brothers and sisters eyes grew even more damp then they were, i was like a father to them they were both brought in from the street by me and my mother and soon after adopted... wait im looking back on my life???... i started to shiver as they stuck the noose around my neck the reverand came and did his prayer and then the executioner asked if i had any last words, i looked up at my family and i smiled.....

Comments

[MsSmith1016]

this is so sad...but it was really good...i enjoyed it...i felt like crying a little

[romancer88]

thanks faor the honest answers everyone ill try harder on my next one

[l Vio l]

Iliked ur story alot it just seems like if it needed somethin more :>

[grimcreeper2]

a little teary...though there are some grammatical errors, it would make a wonderful excerpt to a "well written (very popular)" novel

[xoxcheriesesxox]

thats not sad at all, a little religious and could use a bit more help on the grammar side

[Foxly the pheonix]

great it really captured me 8/10