- there were two children walking in the woods.they ran and ran through those woods like nothing but then one of them triped. burning_eyes they saw that they were miles away home.but then one of them grabed the boy and carried him to the home.the boy was unconsionce but the weight is unberable.she kept walking. as night came through she thought of giving up but she continued.it was completely dark.she couldnt see anything in her path.she heard strange noises but wasent scared. but suddenly she heard a howl from the bush.the howl came closer and closer.she kept walking like nothing was there.her face was pale.the boy was still unconsionce.the howl became a loud growl.she started to walk fast but stilled ignored the growl.she saw her little cabin ontop of the river bed.but suddenly something came in her way. she was scared out of her wits. it was a wolf.the wolfed looked hungary and started to howl louder.and started to jump and tumbled the girl.the boy flew into a small shrub.she started to run but then she saw a carved looking stick.she went back and started to pace herself for the right time.the wolf jumped the girl stabbed the wolf the wolf howled and howled then it fleed away.the girl found the boy and took her to the cabin.she healed the boy and the boy woked up.he started to ask many question but she only answered a few questions. then they said 'lets forget about all of this and rest' the boy said,'ok'.they went to bed.but there night wasent over exclaim
- by angelsuper3 |
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- | Submitted on 10/19/2008 |
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- Title: alone in the dark
- Artist: angelsuper3
- Description: hi the following content can be scary for young viewers. viewers descretion is advised to all ages have a nice day.
- Date: 10/19/2008
- Tags: aloneinthedark
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Comments (2 Comments)
- iLoveCookiies - 08/02/2009
- that is not really scary and yesh it does need some fixing up
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- Casta_Love_My_Name - 06/18/2009
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Umm needs some punctuation and grammatical errors capitilazations and description
In other words no harshness intended but needs alot of work - Report As Spam