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As Kilik walks toward the gates of hell he checks his gear he has the sword of Hiroshima an ancient samuri whose sword has been lost for centuries. He enters through the gates. It starts to rain fire. His dragon spirit awakes and says to him "I hope you know what you are doing kilik". "I already told you why I am doing this" says Kilik. "If you are going to fight him I have words of advice" says the dragon spirit. "What?". "Dont die" says dragon. Kilik laughs if "I die ill just end up here".
2 hours pass
Kilik's Necklace glows. "We are getting closer Kilik" says dragon. "I know".
5 minutes pass
As Kilik is walking a deep rumbling happens inside hell. A giant figure appears. "Why have you come" says the dark figure. " I have come here to kill you". The figure laughs. "You fool you think you can kill me?"says the figure. "I will kill you if its the last thing i do". Those where the last words he ever said as he destroyed the devil and freed his and everyone's soul from eternal doom.
- by xXKyru_KunXx |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/12/2008 |
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- Title: In the confines of hell
- Artist: xXKyru_KunXx
- Description: Just a short story of a hero named Kilik. Hope you like it
- Date: 11/12/2008
- Tags: confines hell
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Comments (3 Comments)
- sonnata moonlight - 02/03/2009
- jazz up the end, put in a bit more detail or else it gets anticlimatic
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- Ceramic Sunset - 11/27/2008
- Format's somewhat strange. When a different character speaks, a new paragraph must be started. Good story, though. 3 stars.
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- xX-Shinigami_Kun-Xx - 11/12/2008
- dude. did u got that from soul calibur? jk nice story.
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