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    "Peter and the Dark Zenternal" chap#1

    Peter was walking home from school with his 1863 legendary guitar on his bac
    Peter "yes i completed your training guitar Hero... crying yes now to show my gf the music i can make.
    Peter Thoughts : maybe she throw her self in my arms and say"oh peter".
    Peter "YES now to go home and get it in".     . In the gaia town were he and his dear gf was at,but little did he no his hole life was about 2 change. When he got in his home. he was shocked, because some 1 trash his house.

    Peter"w-wat the-my house!!! wait did i come to late...What no she isn't like that, she usually cleans up the place...no". in a instant he remember tht his beloved gf was waiting for hem in his home. He ran tho the house and yell "Ms.Panda!" far tht was his gf name. he stop when he found a note on his wall with a coin indented tho it. It read "peter, peter, peter did u really thought i was really ur friend. i Zenternal will take all tht belongs 2 u, for im am the Dark Zenternal!!!". peter was out rage.
    Peter "k...okay...IM GOING TO KILL THAT ZENTERNAL!!!"
    Talking to self " keep his cool dude keep it cool    .the last of the note said "meet me in the park at 12:00pm if u ever wont 2 c u gf again".
    Like wat th note said he meet th Dark Zenternal at 12:00.

    Peter "wat the h***". he saw Zenternal and ms.panda having tea.

    Peter " i thought this was a black mail"

    Zenternal "lol it is, c u gf came a long quietly"

    Peter "K wat about my house"

    Zenternal "oh...when ms.panda open the door the wind blow every thing down, so i told ms.panda tht i was going 2 take her and she insisted tht i leave a note not 2 worry u"

    Peter "@#$%!!! BUT I WAS WORRIED"

    Ms.panda "sorry bu"

    Zenternal " Ms.panda ur 2 be quiet, ur captured remember"

    Ms.panda" oh rite"

    Peter "anuff Zenternal im taking u off my friends list and kikN ur a**". *Zenternal put his hand in his pocket and said*"fine then let's go dog, im tire of speaking like am England". peter told out his guitar and Zenternal took out a role of coin then the 2 ran 2 1another. Stay turn for the chapter.

    "Peter and the Dark Zenternal" Chap#2


    Writer "*Clear throat* Were we last left off, Peter finally Saw his beloved gf again, and now he poring his heart and soul in this 1 fight 2 get here back let's began"

    Wile Peter and Zenternal charge to one another, peter jump high in air with so many flip and turn that Zenternal jaw was drop, then he played his Guitar air style with flaming birds flying around. *Stunned* Sound wave with flaming heroic colors of rage strike the Dark Zenternal in mutable places . *Boom!, Boom!, BOOOOM!!!*. Nothing but smoke fill the air, and *peter landed on his feet*.

    Peter "Ha! i know he was weak nothing can stand my awesome guitar...-wait" the smoke cleared away and there stand Dark Zenternal with a grin on his face.*Dark Zenternal brushing his shoulder's off*

    Zenternal " well that was fun......if yall dun now, lets really get started"

    Peter "*Eye's opened wide* What!!!" Zenternal flip a coin with his thumb then jump with a sucker Kick it. The coin came spinning out of control Tore's peter, but peter jump out the way.

    Peter " Come on dude was that all lolol! ma grand mother could do better then that-Rite Panda"

    Ms.panda "Rite! once she blown up a car... sweatdrop sadly she still paying it off...Peter be hide you!"

    Zenternal "hmpt..."Peter herd a wising sound, he turned quickly.

    Peter " that not possible" just then the coin came back BIGHT red upon peter crushing down.*Zuboom!* the smoke cleared instantly because of the force, and all that was there was a crater with peter in it. Ms.panda ran over and yell his name.

    Zenternal "PANDA!!! *panda stopped in her track's* your to come with me-"

    *Ms.panda with her hand covering her tears*" No! i wont to stay with hem"

    Zenternal"Do u rather i killed hem*Panda shuck no* then your to come with me". Ms.panda turned away from peter and stared walking tore's Zenternal.

    Peter" WAIT ARE U DOING PANDA*Panda stopped* HE'S EVIL *She started walking again* panda...panda!...PANDA!...PANDAAAAA!!!" later in the morning peter look in to the Sun rise. Then he got up out the crater with unbelievable pain.

    Peter talking to his self " I swear...-Dark Zenternal im coming after you, were ever u went...i swear I'll get her back"...then peter walk to the man who train hem in the art of guitar hoping to get the skills he needed to put Dark Zenternal in his grave..Stay turn for the next chapter.

    "Peter and the Dark Zenternal" Chap#3

    Writer" Peter was going to go over Master-Guitar Jo-jo in hope of gaining the skills he needed to defect the dark Zenternal"

    Peter a rived at the " Jo-jo of the rock-N-soul". he saw his master under the tree with his stral hat over his face, wile the trainee were running laps intel the master his self said stop. Peter stand over hem and bow with respect and said.

    Peter "Master-Guitar im here to seek your advice". Master-Guitar lift his hat and jump with excitement.

    Master-guitar "HEAY IF IT INST PETER-SAN, HEAY EVERY ONE STOP AND COME AND MEET MA OLD TRAINEE". All the trainee's drop from tireness and one yelled "finally!!!"

    Peter "lo...l you haven't change at all Master-guitar"

    Master-guitar "SO WHAT CAN I DO YOU-*Saw throw peter face* WHO DONE IT"

    Peter " Dark Zenternal,and he took my gf"

    Master-Guitar "But how,*turn his back against Peter* i thought i trained my granddaughter as the same level as you"

    *Peter looked down in descry* "Yes Master-Guitar but,* Tightened fist* if only i was a little more Stronger so i can-"

    *Master-Guitar turned back to look at peter "So you can what!...You and my daughter are the most proudest trainee's i have ever train*peter looked up at hem*, I WELL TEACH What YOU NEED BUT, YOU CAN ONLY USE IT TO SAVE MY GRAND DAUGHTER NOTHING EL'S. DO YOU UNDERSTAND"

    Peter "Sir!!!"

    Master-Guitar "Then let's began". Then Master-Guitar took Peter to an pole.

    Master-Guitar "You must stand on this pole and stuck up energy for ONE WEEK"

    Peter "A WEEK I NEED 2 SAVE HER NOW"

    Master-Guitar " You are to stand on this pole and suck up the energy that surrounds you for one week, a human can only be awake for more then 24hour's if not more, but by sucking up the energy you can exseed that limit. Every breath that a human nor animal exhales releases energy. by the time when the sevened sun has drop. You'll be able to use SUPER-HERO-GUITAR-MODE, but be wear this well put upon loads of stress on the user's body that it it's self cant handle it witch in most case's......The user DIE'S".

    Peter " Panda is worth more then life its self". So Peter clime the pole waiting and Sucking the energy up.

    Day1 Peter thought's " The first day went by and i saw the sun raze and set"

    Day2 Peter thought's " The kids were playing ball and OUCH!!!*ball got thrown at peter*,and after this i going to kill THOSE KIDS!".

    Day3 Peter thought's " It rained and was thundering...Gods please don't strike me with lighting"

    Day4 Peter thought's " MASTER-GUITAR CAME OUT AND STARTED SHAKING THE POLE...LO...L I'M GOING TO KILL HEM NEXT"

    Day5 Peter thought's " In all this time all the energy i soke up, i could fell it, and my body felt lighter...(OUT LOUD) THIS ROCK!!!"

    Day6 Peter thought's " totally awesome, the kids throw the ball at me, and once i thought it,A flaming bird flied by and the ball burst into flames...LOOK AT THOSE KID RUN- will that take's care of that, now for master"

    Last Day Peter thought's "Flaming wing came out my back...i fell like i could do any thing...-_->And why is every one eyeballing me...they act's as if they never saw a boy with flaming wing's...K maybe not, cant Blane them tho".

    Master-Guitar" You may step of the pole now". Peter flow down with his wings. Master-Guitar gather every one.

    Master-Guitar" My Trainee's, Gaia zOMG pro's, and apprentice's... this boy peter is now a master guitar hero, and i present hem with* Master-Guitar pulled out a Twin 1996's Twin Guitar with the base of both fuse...its basically Two Guitar's into 1* 1996's twin HollowFlameHalk". Every one Claps, and Peter took it and was really existed.

    Peter " YEAH-THIS THING IS BETTER THEN SEX'S". Every stop clapping with jaws drop here and there.

    Peter talking to self " I think a better go now"

    *Master-Guitar leaned over and whispered "I think that's a good idea". With excitement that he was going to when Peter flow over every one, into the derrection that Zenternal Went. Stay tune for the last chapter.

    "Peter and the Dark Zenternal" Chap#last


    Writer "*Sniff* man it almost make me wont to cry ending this...but a writer can only go so far...Let's end this dudes and dudeds"

    Flamed winged peter( yeah you like his new name) Went to find Dark Zenternal, it was to easy because peter from the sky spotted hem dragging Ms.Panda .*peter flow down*.
    "Heay Dark Zenternal". Dark Zenternal look around and was lost.
    Dark Zenternal "Ms.Panda did you herd something"
    Ms.Panda "Look in the sky". Zenternal looked up.
    Ms.Panda " It a bird!"
    Zenternal "Nah i think its a plane".
    Ms.Panda " No it's Flamed Winged peter". Zenternal was even more lost,*Ms.panda ran for her life*.
    *Zenternal looked up once again* "!!!". *CUBBLOW!!!*. Zenternal got blow back and slam throw a cupple of tree's, not Knowing what in the hell hit hem. Then peter walk over to panda. Panda was shocked to see hem cry for her, and more shocked that there was flame's that look as if there were wings coming out his back.
    *Peter put his arms around Ms.panda tightly and said* " I miss you so much...Im going to end this...panda".
    *scared to hug hem with the flame, she put her head on his chess,and lays there and said* "yeah i no"
    *Zenternal got up and yelled* "OH INST THIS ROMANTIC!!!...SORRY INTERRUPT THIS PROGRAM, BUT THERE A 100% CHANGE OF PETER DIEING TO DAY"
    *Peter let go of Panda and said* " Wait here panda, this wont take long*
    Zenternal " Damn rite, this wont take long".Zenternal got his roll of coin out( remember from the second chapter)
    *Peter turned hard to look at Dark Zenternal* " THIS IS IT!!! *Then took his Twin flame halk guitar* im going to rock your world". With nothing els said Zenternal jump high into the air, and throw out his roll of coin's then hit each of them with a instant comble. The coins flied like missiles, and all lock on Dark Peter.
    Peter " NOT THIS TIME". Peter Viwtifully lift his hand, and slam down on his guitar. Then a Giant Rainbow Flaming Bird flow out of it. the coin were like father's to this great animal and each of them melted and sissle into nothingness.
    *Dark With his back band and jaw drop, turned and started running*
    Zenternal "No no no NOOOO!!!!" *the bird crash in Dark Zenternal with an Wipe out, all tree and every thing in the area was vaperrized*., but peter held his Wing over Ms.panda shielded her.
    Ms.panda "Is it over"
    *peter lifted his wing over top of her and said* "Don't count on it". that smoke took time to clear, and Peter and Panda was shocked to see Zenternal Standing, but if more shocked that his body was covered in blackened flame's.
    *Peter turn to panda and yelled* "RUN-RUN AS FAR AS YOU CAN AWAY FROM THIS PLACE"
    Ms.panda "but-"
    Peter " dont worry...*Smiled* i be oka, now RUN!!!". With out a second thought she was running hoping that he be okay.
    REAL Dark Zenternal "...you will die now"
    Peter"LOL, no wonder you took my friend's Zenternal face because your real one look's ugly...One Questing who are you really"
    REAL dark Zenternal " Sents your about to die anyways i guess i tell you...My real name is MASTER-KEY_PLAYER, im your gf grandfather's Ravel"
    Peter " Nice to know...so that coin kicking thing inst your move's, its Zenternal"
    Master-key_player "Yup, i though it will make a good cover up... anuff talk...YOU'LL DIE NOW". Master-key_player jump up high with in the air and charge a black hole.
    Peter " WAIT ONE MORE QUESTING WHAT DID YOU DO WITH ZENTERNAL". Master-Key_player just avoid what he was saying.
    Peter " Fine..."
    Peter thought's " God I pray that this super-mode doesn't kill me, so-*Started yelling* SO I CAN SEE MY GF!!!". *Peter Wing grow bigger*
    Continued praying out loud " SO I CAN LAUGH AND CRY WITH MY FRIENDS AGAIN" *Pointed guitar at Master-Key_player*
    Continued praying out loud "AND SO!!!!-...i can say sorry to zenternal for thinking he took my gf". Suddenly an angle a paired and mouth move something to Peter, then trust his arm at the guitar, and nodded at peter, peter nodded back, lastly they both look forward at Master-Key_player, and from the peack of the twin guitar an Rainbowed BLAST TRUSTED at Master-key_player.
    Master-key_player"IMPOSSIBLEEEEE!!!!!!". It hit hem and nothing remained. peter look back at the angle when he saw his wings blow out...then blacked out.

    Peter woke up and find his self in a bed. With all his friend around hem, Master-Guitar, Panda sister, Ms.panda...and Zenternal, but first peter looked over at Ms.panda...!!! watch was crying up and jump on hem.
    Peter "Ouch!!! panda i still hurt"
    *Panda got off and said* " Sorry"
    Peter " DAMN I HURT AL OVER> I CANT MORE!!!"
    Master-guitar " I told you...". nurse came in the room and said.
    " Visit time's are up"
    Panda "ohhhhhh i wont to stay"
    Panda Sister " Cheer up panda, you can come tomorrow"
    *Panda looked bombed out and mumble* "Fine"
    Nurse " Come on now". every body started leaving even the nurse.
    Peter " Yo Zenternal!". Zenternal turn to look at at hem and said "yes". Nurse came back and said
    " Zenternal you come on to".Peter look at the nurse and said.
    "5more min's Ka".
    Nurse "Fine...5 more". she walk back out.
    *Peter looked at Zenternal and said* "Sorry man i assumed that you was Master-Key_Player"
    *Zenternal shubed his hand in his pocket and smile then said* "Dude its cool, i may be a little clammy with ma matter's but, i think i could know why you mistake that". Peter looked up and held his hand up with the pain and said.
    "Fight with the heart and then you can only make it"
    Zenternal " what"
    *Peter smiled and said* " Its what angle said to me"
    Zenternal "lolo..l I see, well get some rest dude"
    *Peter put his hand back down, smile and said* "Sure Zac".
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