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You were the apple of my eye, but you gave me a lie
I thought you were my soulmate but your only my schoolmate
I thought you liked me but you chose her
I thought you loved me but you lied to me
I've treated you fairly but all you did was tease me
I had liked you so much now I hate you
I thought you'd choose me but you loved her
You were so selfish so i slapped you with a catfish
I will hate with all my life on what you did, If I'd love you now and forever then I'd be dead
I would cry in a corner but you won't care instead you'll be hugging a pink teddybear
I've liked you for a year now but all you do is ignore me
I feel like your not the one for me
Then one day you told me you love me, I said I'd love you too
but then you'd be a pimp who loved three or two
One day you told me you loved me forever, you asked me to be your only lover
I agreed but the day after I saw him french kissing another woman
You couldn't be trusted. I feel like a piece of metal , all worn out and rusted
After that day I saw you at school walking near me
I held out a knife on his throat I knew that he'd fear me
his friends saw what I'm doing and said that they'd kill me
They shot a gun at me but I stabbed him at the heart
They all look so scared that they smell like fart
- Title: My love of Hatred for you
- Artist: Torasshi
- Description: not that good of a writer am I :/ i get that a lot, first time writing here.. lol some of the parts are funny you cant help but laugh xDD
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: love hate romance
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Comments (3 Comments)
- FlyyMeToPluto - 11/29/2008
- That was a pretty good story but that other person is right . If you wanted it to rhyme then you didn't succed. But if you weren't tryn to make it rhyme than i think it was a great story!
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- dogmaster5 - 11/29/2008
- i like it all up till the end where you start to just lose it
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- 2 SEKSY 4 U - 11/29/2008
- it pritty good really its just that if you where tying to rym it didnt really work and you repeted yourself a bit i think
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