Remember it like Yesterday

• Artist: deathnate1
• Description: This is the first paragraph from a piece of writing that im doing for my english class.
  Hope ya like it.
  Welcome to comments.
• Date: 12/07/2008
• Tags: remember like yesterday

Vincent was sitting at his old high school football field bleachers, looking out into the red, orange and gold colors shine over the whole school and the other fields. God…. This is beautiful…. He thought that for while but the sun was setting and everything was changing. Like something put a blanket over everything and stopped the sun to shine. While he was waiting for everything to change, a couple bleachers ahead of him started to have smoke coming right out of it. Vincent didn’t know what the hell was going on. As soon as he blinked to realize there was smoke, a monster started to form. When he blinked again a bull faced monster came out and grabbed him and brought him into the smoke where the monster came from.

Comments

[Ace The Demon King--]

not bad dude

[Lil sweet sassy punk]

u should put the rest of the story down when u finissh cuz tht was good =),do u like english...