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"NO!" I screamed. My heart throbed,
i fell to my knees. A huge cloud of darkness
rose up upon Sarah, she ran but she wasnt fast enough,
she triped over the rock hard tar of our driveway.
The cloud came closer and closer darker and darker.
The more I screamed the more I cried.
I could hear Sarah's voice being drowned by
the darkness surrounding her and pulling her in.
I didnt know what to do, I was so confused, should
I run and at least try to pull her out of the swirling
cloud or wait and watch to see what would happen?
I thought really hard..until.. "Kayla! PLEASE!"
Is all I could hear from Sarah.
At this point I could hardley see her.
Wait! what was I thinking? Sarah was my best friend ,
how could I let the darkness take her!?
My heart shuddered at the tought of runing
into the darkness,
but it couldnt stop me!
I wasn't going to back donw,
no matter what!
I help my breath and bit my toung....and ran!
The closer I came the more I got sucked into
the darkness, just like a magnet.
I didnt think about anything all I could to was focus on Sarah,
I was at least a couple of steps away from total darkness,
my heart pounded , but that didnt mtter, ''Sarah, are you in there?''
I manneaged to crocke out.
No reply.
''Sarah! where are you? please take my hand!''
I maneged to pull out my hand, and slowly opened my eyes,
I coulnt see a thing.
Just total darkness.
''Please Sarah!" I screamed.
''Kayla! Is that you?' Said a voice.
It was very near me, btu I had to keep goin.
I kept walking, but every step became harder and harder.
I felt backwards and hit the outside of my palm.
''Ouch!'' I screamed....And a few other things....
I jumped right back up and carryed on my search.
As I walked I could hear Sahrah
slowly repeating ''over here"
I followed the voice until I grabbed
a soft hand knitted jersey.
My eyes slowly manneged to open and saw Sarah.
''You got me!'' she yelled.
We ran as fast as we posibly could.
It was hard
each step pulled us back.
But eventually we got through!
I sglanced back at sarah to see how she ws doing,
as she was clentching my hand rather hard!
As my head slowly turned ...I screamed!
As loud as I posible could! My lungs felt as if
it could bust! A hugh black creature with 3 red
eyes and yellow goo sliming out of it's mouth.
I couldn't talk , I just couldn't breath.
I just screamed.
The monster grabed my thrat with huge claws
and held me to the ground,
Its teeeth where about to scrape the skin off of my face until...
No, Sarah! NO!! It's me, Kayla! please dont hurt me!''
My head was thumping ,
the claws was so tightly wraped around my neck.
My hands lifted up and glabed the claws and pulled them brack.
I some how maneged to break the solid claws and got up.
I was so surprised, I was suddenly so strong.
I grabed the monster and threw it as
hard as I could into the air.
The monster flew so high I couldt see him!
I felt so amazing, I flexed my muscles and
lifted my t - shrit to see my 8 pack!
''Woah!'' i said.
The darkness and the monster where out of site.
If your wondering where my parents where this whole time,
they where in hawiie, and the baby sitter
was at the store buying junk food....again!
Her name was Gemma, arrggh I hated her! As
much as I beged my parents not to hire her...t
hey didnt listen and told me she was a resposible young ''adualt''!!??
a ran inside and switched the tv on to see if any
one else had the same thinng....and they did! half the world did!
775 people have died so far! and 220 people
have suddenly found super powers! just like me!
Its been 3 years now, I have unfurtunaltly
LOST my 8 pack and all my muscles! but I still
have my super human strenth!
I haven heared from the monster since....
well that was until last Sunday, when he returned,
....but thats onother story of how I lost my preciouse life.
THE END!
- Title: the Darknesss
- Artist: Kelz 14
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Description:
what really happens to you...
please rate this story and please comment because I want to know what YOU think of MY story....IT'S ALL BECAUSE OF...YOU!!!!!
If u do not rate the monster will come kill you and will haunt you for eternity at tweleve oclock TONIGHT! lol lol lol lol lol just jokes! just please rate it! (it earns ur coins you know!) - Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: darknesss horror comedy irony death
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Comments (5 Comments)
- pinkpix - 04/04/2009
- oh wow, ur a good writter ^^
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- Devil_and_Angel7 - 01/09/2009
- ohh cool this story is very nice please gives me more stories.
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- Devil_and_Angel7 - 01/09/2009
- ohh cool this story is very nice please gives me more stories.
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- xX Paranoid Agent Xx - 12/24/2008
- that was a good story and he's right it was funny..she had an eight pack...HaHa...i wish i had at least two...lolz...no, but the story was great...keep writing things like that and i'll keep reading ^_^ whooo....funny...hahaha
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- The Legendary Grant - 12/08/2008
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gr8 story..
its kinda funni
tnx for rating mine - Report As Spam