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Long ago in Juiri village, a baby was being born. The mom, Juliana, was screaming wahmbulance at her husband to get the docter. He just stood there and laughed. So she ran herself to the Juiri villiage hospital. Her husband was a little wore out from partying the other night.
Juliana was telling the docters "I am having a baby." The docters nodded their heads. After a couple hours, she had a baby with blue hair and pale grey eyes. She held it close to her and said "Haruti." The door clacked open and there was a young docter with a nametag that said "Narooti-kun Tikiay". He knelt down beside the new mother and said
" I am Narooti Tikiay and I examine the baby's to see if they are healthy or cursed."
Juliana handed over the baby to Narooti as he examined the baby. He said
"Its a girl and has been cursed by the powe of the water. The mother started crying cry . Any baby who is cursed usually dies within the next day. She then screamed "I DONT WANT THIS THING!"
Narooti took the baby and held it close to his chest and said, "Are you sure?"
Juliana shook her head and Narooti took the baby and put it in a incubater. He looked into her eyes and decided that he loved her heart . He would take good care of her. He turned to the mom and said
"It's not crying because its cursed. Its normal if the baby is cursed and its not crying."
"I dont give a care, I DONT WANT THAT THING." The mom screamed wahmbulance
Narooti sighed and then said "Name it will you?"
"Haruti!" The mother yelled angerly.
That night, snow fell. Narooti took the baby and left for his house. He held the baby close and tight. He didnt want to lose her. heart heart heart
11 years later
Haruti was now 11 years old and Narooti is 30. Narooti has a emoish hair cut with great looks. Haruti, although, does not call him dad. Narooti, has never told Haruti she was cursed. He was cursed too. So..he is going to tell her that she is and she has to do somthing she dosent want to do.
In the next entry: Haruti finds out about her powers and she fights her very first person. Narooti falls in love and Haruti and Narooti get invited to save their world.
- by Princess x Yuki |
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- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: Haruti's Curse 1
- Artist: Princess x Yuki
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Description:
Haruti (Hair-roo-tie) was cursed by the spirit of the water. The mom didnt want her anymore so she gave him to the docter. Haruti lives with the docter and takes care of her. The docter...is cursed as well. The docters name is Narooti (Nare-root-tea)
I know i have a few spelling errors - Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: harutis curse
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Comments (7 Comments)
- jkihu1011 - 06/30/2009
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- c00k1emonstar - 02/03/2009
- But it is also very good!
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- c00k1emonstar - 02/03/2009
- Its a bit rushed into the story you could add a bit more detail.
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- TheDarkArtist - 01/11/2009
- Nice beginning... but you made a million errors in grammar and spelling. Please edit this and make it better! 3/5
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- Princess x Yuki - 12/24/2008
- Thank you so much! It should be up on staurday!
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- iiButtsecks - 12/19/2008
- ;D Can you read my story? i warn you, its pretty long cuz its chapter 1 and 2 ;P go here: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=100827953#title
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- iiButtsecks - 12/19/2008
- Thats Really Good! I Like That! Can You post me the next part? i cant seem to find it anywhere, unless your still working on it? Anyway,i cant wait to see what happens! it sounds interesting!
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