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Dawn was just reaching over the mountains and Hawk looked up to see the moon falling right over the sun. And then just as he looked away he sensed a spiritual presents near him and he turned around and saw his leader Forrestsky! Greetings master, Hawk bowed down in front of him respectfully. Hawkswing have you herd any news from the clan in the north. No nothing Hawk said. But as I was crossing the river area I meet up with moonflight of the east clan. Really forrestsky said with an ambitious tone in his voice and what did she say. She said that she reported to dragonfang that she there was An eagle sent around the area. Good forrestsky said to hawk I will report that to the rest of the clan. Come on hawkswing we have a long ways to travel. Soon they reached the camps tunnel and he saw his mate featherwatcher waiting for him. Hi hawkswing she greeted him and purred happily welcome back. The kits are wondering were you have been. Then all the sudden Tigerkit, stormkit, and darkkit came bouncing around their father. Where have you been darkkit mewed. I just returned from a mission Hawkswing reassured him. And licked him in between his ears. Now Featherwatcher said why don’t you and your brothers go and get some freshkill. Ok darkkit mewed and stumbled off to the freshkill pile with tigerkit and stormkit right beside him. So how was your mission Featherwatcher asked him? it was hard he said. i am going to go rest for a wile in the den ok he mewed back to her. fine she said i'll bring you a vole later. then hawkswing went to go lay down and he saw nightclaw laying in his den hey nightclaw your not always laying in your den like this on such a nice afternoon like this? well i caught a bit of whitecough he said coughing in between the sentince. oh sorry to hear that hawkswing told him.its ok though lionpelt said that i should be better after a days rest, well i am going to go to sleep now Hawkswing said laying into his nest and falling asleep. to be continued.
- by itachi_wolf_of_sorrows |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: into the night
- Artist: itachi_wolf_of_sorrows
- Description: well it is sorta like warriors but a little different
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: into night
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Comments (3 Comments)
- stormy-oak - 03/16/2009
- It's not bad dear, but you need to put it into paragraphs. It isn't easy on the eyes to stare at such a large block of writing. It also helps the ideas flow more naturally if you break it up, as counter-intuitive as that sounds.
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- X-Ray1404 - 12/29/2008
- This story was awesome but i didnt read the whole thing your a good writer keep up the good work
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- devils delinquent - 12/17/2008
- it was a ok story u need 2 be more creative
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