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i broke down after i came too when i say the died body.
oh..oh god what have i done!, i am no more then a mear monster!
i picked up a pice of broken glass and held it up to my heart.
good bye world as i sed with tears rolling down my face. No stop you cant!
why not do you not wish me to die as lee sed? No he sed with a kind but sad voice i wish you to live. but every day i hunger for blood, every day i want more, every day i become more and more of a vampire, and every day i lose more and more of my humanity... so why do you not want me to die?
because I love you too much to let you die he says to me so what i dont care if your turning in to a monster i love you and that will never change.
if you become a monster ill become one too! No you musent!
i will jest for you... He looks at me, blood and tears runs down my face he wipes it away and kisses my head while he holds me in his arms...
i will never let you die. As i look up i see Lee standing in the door way with a loaded gun amed at me.. she pulls the triger but he blocked it and trew the pice of glass at lee killing her. As he calapsed in my arms i begd no god no plz no.. he asked me to kill him i could not but i could not let him go like that so i told him i am going to turn him in too a vampire he looked at me and sed ok.
i told him this may or may not work but he sed i dont care..
so i turned him then all i could do was wait and see. later on that night he started to change and move. i rushed over to were he was i was happy to see he was alive but i was sad all the same because he was no longer able to see his mother or father or sisters. he told me to stop crying i smiled and sed come on lets go we left the mation and burnd it down to honer all of the died resodenc the snow was no longer cold his tuch was no longer warm and his life was new what now you ask.... i dont know will go were ever the night gose.
- by noooooooobbbbbb |
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- | Submitted on 12/15/2008 |
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- Title: blood rose night
- Artist: noooooooobbbbbb
- Description: a vampire and a humen fall in love but lee her sister forbeds itand trys to kill her dut ends up badly injering her lover will he die or will he live?
- Date: 12/15/2008
- Tags: blood rose night
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Comments (3 Comments)
- AncientChronicles - 05/25/2009
- i can't bear to continue reading after the first stanza---it's full of grammar mistakes and spelling errors! i'm not gonna rate this. PLEASE at least make some effort to at least check the dictionary if you're not sure of the spelling before posting this s**t up!
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- wildflower2828 - 04/11/2009
- I agree with twilight30. Have you ever heard of PROOF READING or SPELL CHECK?
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- skaterdudette101 - 03/16/2009
- i love the story because well both of the people get to be with each other for ever and because it shows that when you find your true love the you know that he or she will do anything to keep you alive. that is what i like about this story.
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