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I sat behind the dumpster, cold and scared. I heard the noises, heard her crying, his heavy breathing. I knew what he was doing to her, but refused to believe it. I couldn’t help her, I didn’t know how. When the night grew silent, I peaked around the dumpster; I saw the blood, saw her cloths shredded and scattered, and him standing over her. He looked my direction; quickly I turned hoping, begging he didn’t see me. I heard his footsteps as he walked away; I breathed a sigh of relief that he didn’t see me. What had I just witnessed? Will I get involved in all of this? I hope not. He was gone, he wasn’t going to come back and hurt me. That’s all that mattered.
For seven years that night had haunted me; even now I wake up screaming. They never found out who did it, but I knew that they wouldn’t give up the case. Abigail Borden was dead. Her family wanted justice. But they would never know that I was the only person who saw what he looked like. He stared into my dreams every night, telling me that I will be next. I knew I wouldn’t because he doesn’t know who I am.
- by Rebecca Roads |
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- | Submitted on 12/19/2008 |
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- Title: it's a mystery
- Artist: Rebecca Roads
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Description:
i worked very hard on this so i would like it if no one copied and pasted it... because it wouldnt be fair if they got credit for something someone else did... thank you...
and i'm looking for advice so please comment.
thank you so very much! - Date: 12/19/2008
- Tags: mystery
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Maxx Wintz - 12/20/2008
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amazing . my favourite =]
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- Alfons Armstrong - 12/20/2008
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wow.. that pretty amazing...
cant wait to read more 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Zverina - 12/20/2008
- not bad..pretty good 5/5 ^-^
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