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As Sean woke up he heard footsteps outside his door he knew it was the military searching houses for unwanted people. The war had been going on for almost 5 years. As Sean went to his porch to smell the morning breeze he saw a girl about his age lying on his porch motionless. She was covered in a ripped mink blanket that had blood and dirt all over it she had cuts and bruises all over her body. When Sean went closer she pulled out a knife and told him to back away. Sean knew who she was she was apart of the rebel army in the forests. She told him if he was a helper. Sean did not know what a helper was but instead he said yes i am. The girl walked into Sean's home like it was hers threw the blanket on the floor and fell asleep on his couch. Sean now saw her body it was like an angels body her skin looked so smooth and her hair shined in the morning sunlight. Her eyes were like little marbles and her lips so glossy. The girl had watched Sean look at her for about 5 minutes and finally said excuse me. Sean looked over at here face and said Sorry ma'am its just you look so beautiful. She repiled with a burst of laughter she said don't call me ma'am it makes me feel old call me Kayla she help out her hand and he said Sean while shaking her hand. As hours passed Kayla slpet on the couch and Sean just sat there looking amazed that him of all people got a rebel in his home he knew it was bad and thought should i let her stay or call the military. As he thought Kayla was in a deep sleep she felt cold and her clothes were nothing but a bra and some shorts. it was winter and if she had left it would be cold. It grew darker and Sean woke up to the smell of bacon and eggs he looked over at Kayla who had taken Sean's Shirt and hoodie, she was wearing and apron and looked like a mother. When their were eating a knock cam opon the door Sean answered it and a military officer was at the door. he replied with a gun to Sean's face and said we need to check your home for the rebels. Sean just moved out of the way. As the military searched the hom Kayla and Sean ate their meal and when their were done the military handed Sean a box and a envelope.
The mysterious envelope had a card that said Thank you for your participation in the search. The box contained about 100$. Sean took the money and handed it to Kayla.
"I think your gonna need this more than i do." Sean whispered
"Thank you." She said as she took the money.
Kayla worked around the home as Sean went to work and got clothes for Kayla. Kayla wore everything that a women wanted to wear but couldn't get because of the economy. The war was still going strong when Sean found a UPS truck in his driveway. A man stepped out and went over to Sean had him sign for the package and he left. Sean looked at the package and it was from someone he thought was dead when he opened it it was the because his father had died and everything he owned went to him. When Kayla looked at Sean and his package just starring into the sky she called his name but no reply and then tears came from Sean's eyes. Kayla went over to him wiped the tears off his face and gave him a kiss on the cheek and said hey you there? When Sean looked at Kayla he saw that she had kissed him her lip gloss was on his cheek.
End of part 1
- by Dominant Lover |
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- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: Never ending love part 1
- Artist: Dominant Lover
- Description: Dont let anyone say you can't because you can if you set your mind on that one thing.
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: happiness
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Holy angel1441 - 05/03/2009
- I loved it!!!! smile
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- Smashing Heartbeats - 04/12/2009
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Looking forward to part 2 [:
Nice work except for certain parts, you can improve on the sentence structure and dialogue[:
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- ariellekate - 12/23/2008
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you sort of used incorrect grammar but other than that it was awsome cant wait untill part 2! merry x~mas! - Report As Spam
- Dominant Lover - 12/20/2008
- Part 2 will come out as soon as i can write it
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