a broken dream

• Artist: 451d3
• Description: this is about how everyone is in a world that we think is free i know grammer is not right and some of it does not make senes but if u think of what it means then u will know what is truly free
• Date: 12/20/2008
• Tags: broken dream

we all have a dream and we all want to live it when your in love or in fear u want to go to a world where no one or your loved one can get u even thou we can't get their we still wish we could when are hearts are free and we are not bound by anything when we cry is when we wish when we die is when we are there so find the one that u love tell her/him that u love them no matter what happen because the world we life in is only a broken dream of our hearts

Comments

[Royal Moo]

biggrin ahahah. But still. razz

[451d3]

if u think that we are never truly free then u will be a slavy to yourself and all that u know u will never know what freedom of truly is and will be with no fear no stress and nothing but peace

[Loyal2-1]

Aside from the *Severly* Twisted grammar in this terribly short entry, It's not bad. But because of the horrible style of writing, and the fact that the entire entry is one perfect example of a run-on sentence, I'm gonna have to give it a 1/5... If that.

[Ayaima]

I don't agree with this at all, because in theory we are never truly free whether it be in the mind, soul, heart, or politics. Perhaps this is how you feel, but it doesn't make sense at parts.