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“NO STOP” she screamed running towards him. She couldn’t take it anymore, the thought of him leaving was just to much for her to bare. He slowly turned around curious as to what she wanted. Her legs aching, she ran faster towards him, until finally she reached out for him, hugging him tightly in despair . The tears flowed endlessly out of her eyes streaming down her cheeks. “Please don’t go” she whispered softly “I…I..I-” she was lost for words. The feelings she held for him were so strong and overwhelming. Then suddenly without thought the words slipped out “ I Love You”. It was no joke that’s how she felt. She loved him with all her heart, and although it hurt her so much, a weight was lifted as she screamed those true words, desperately trying to reach out for him.
- by fantasy dr3am3r |
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- | Submitted on 12/31/2008 |
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- Title: A desperate cry.
- Artist: fantasy dr3am3r
- Description: A small romance piece I wrote one night. This is my first ever entry so be nice and please leave me lots of comments. I really would like people's opinions on it and if enough people like this I will carry it on.
- Date: 12/31/2008
- Tags: desperate romance love tragedy
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Comments (1 Comments)
- binarymind - 01/03/2009
- Hmmm... I like the idea, the writing itself is great! You need to do a new line for speech though, and I think it would benifit from a little more imagery! Nice work, though!
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