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I was limp in my vampire prince's arms. I started to lose my concentration, I blacked out. "Katie?" It was like an angel was calling me, "Katie come on," it called again. I shook my head "What?" I said trying to get my concentration back. Someone was hugging me I could feel their body heat, "Katie I'm glad to see you focused," a cheerful voice said. I tried to find where the voice was coming from but I couldn't. "Don't worry you just need to sleep. I'll carry you to our castle, and I'll get the horses later." The voice told me, I blacked out after the voice finished talking. I was dreaming in my dream there I was with my vampire prince DeVonte, but soon I lost him I couldn't find him, "DeVonte!" I cried, a figure stepped out from behind a tree.
"DeVonte?" I asked, but it wasn't the figure was muscular, and his hair was midnight black, he started to laugh "Who are you? What do you want with me?" I questioned the figure. The boy said was "Danger will come from you soon." The shock woke me up "Kate are you ok?" I turned to find DeVonte looking at me, "Yeah, I'm fine just a dream." I told him. He took me in his arms, and hugged me. "Will you tell me what you were dreaming about?" he asked, I nodded. "I was dreaming about us, but then I couldn't find you instead a muscular boy with jet black hair stepped out, he told me 'Danger will come from me soon.' then I woke up" I told him, DeVonte's face changed his face wasn’t cheerful anymore it was a scared look. "DeVonte?" I asked he shook away his scared face. "Why is he saying that to you? It's not against the law anymore." He started talking to himself now. He dropped his arms. "What do you mean? DEVONTE DON'T HIDE STUFF FROM ME!" I yelled at him. He covered my mouth, "Ok I guess that it involves you, you have the right to know, you saw my older brother." he finally told me what he ment, and now I was shocked."What do you mean is he going to try and kill me?!" I asked, I wanted to know
He rubbed my arms now, "Don't worry I won't let anything happen to you," he told me kissing my forehead. "Ok, thank you." but I didn't kiss his forehead I kissed his check. I saw him turn red a little, but then he turned to me "My mom told me he might come for a visit soon, I just want to know when." as he finished, someone called for him "DeVonte your brothers here, and bring down your girlfriend," he was turning a bright red, I giggled. He grabbed my hand, and dragged me out of his room. We were down stairs in a flash, "Ah there he is, and Kate you look lovely." I giggled when his mom told me I looked "Lovely" next to his mother was the muscular, jet black hair brother of DeVonte's.
"Hello, I'm Brice. Sorry to give you the scare in your dream Kate." Brice said, DeVonte glared at him. Brice walked over toward me; he grabbed my hand, and kissed the top of my hand. My faced turn red, "Wow Kate you look like a radish." DeVonte’s mother said, Brice roared with laughter. "Ok knock it off, come on Kate let's go," DeVonte said pulling me toward the stairs, "Aw don't leave so soon I wanted to talk to Kate." Brice said smiling, DeVonte nodded then let go of my arm. "Talk to him. If anything, anything at all happens try to run," DeVonte whispered to me, "Ok I'll try." I told him slowly walking toward Brice. Brice held out his hand but I refused to take it, instead he grabbed me by my hip, and dragged me. I could hear DeVonte growling, it was like a warning to his brother.
Brice lead me outside "I'm glad I'm able to talk to you little dreamer, now why did DeVonte choose you? Why not another girl?" He asked me, I lifted my shoulders, and let them fall again "I don't know, I just told him that I wanted to be a vampire, and he made my wish come true." I explained to him. "I see you asked him to make you a vampire, that’s why your eyes are like emeralds. Simply sexy, I mean very SEXY" He said walking close to me, I turned around so I didn't have to face him. "Don't be like that babe, if you don't want that loser anymore come to me, I'll do you right." His words shocked me, he wrapped my arms around my hips, and he rested his head on my shoulders. He started nibbling on my ear, and then a voice in my head said "Kick his a** and run! RUN KATE! GET AWAY FROM HIM!"
I tried what the voice told me, I slammed my elbow into his chest, "Get off me!" I yelled at him. "Kate!?" DeVonte was calling me; I could see him running toward me. When he reached me he saw the tears in my eyes, and he also saw Brice holding his chest. “Wow Brice I knew you were weak but I didn't know you were that weak," DeVonte laughed, I joined in. "Come on Kate lets go inside," DeVonte said grabbing my hand, and stated leading me toward the castle. "I'll get her DeVonte Don't Worry I Will!" I heard Brice yell.
(TO BE FINISHED IN PART 3!!!!)
- Title: Vampire Princess Part 2
- Artist: llKiki
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Vampire Princess Part 2
Katie Gets Bit By The Vampire Prince DeVonte, As Katie Learns About What It's Like To Be A Vampire More Trouble Come In the Road. Will Katie Stay With DeVonte After A Dark Figure Tries To Break Them Up? Will Katies Parents Ever Get To See Her Again!? Why Am I Asking You These Questions? Read To Find Out In This Part!! (I'm Writing I 1st Person For The Rest Of The Story 3rd Person Isnt My Thing) - Date: 01/03/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- EarthChild Eco-Friendly - 06/03/2010
- I like this part more it good.
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- iliandra1000 - 08/31/2009
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i agree but besides that its pretty good ^_^
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- Dolly Akezai - 05/10/2009
- lol "KICK HIS a**!" xD i love this so far =3
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- VKMpress - 01/10/2009
- Hey i do agree with Alainlalaland it really is.............but otherwise it's really good...!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- alainlalaland - 01/04/2009
- Huh, it's a pretty good plot line but it gets kinda sketchy every once in a while. It's good, don't get me wrong, but you should try having someone else read it before posting. smile 4/5
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