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You are the hushed,
The secret, the kept,
How my heart was in silence swept.
You are the rhyme,
The tale, the word,
The voice that lingers though unheard.
You are the chain,
The master, the rule,
The snare that has captured a fool.
You are the wish,
The dream, the song,
The love that never quite belonged.
- by TinyButShiny |
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- | Submitted on 02/12/2009 |
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- Title: Longing
- Artist: TinyButShiny
- Description: O, the woes of unrequited love and the poetry that ensues! xD haha, this is dedicated to, ahem... This is a Valentine's day poem of sorts. It's a little gloomy though, and it's pretty short xD. Pardon me and my poetry noobness :).
- Date: 02/12/2009
- Tags: longing valentinesday love unrequited
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Haiizel Nut - 12/17/2010
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This is really good, and I hope
to write something similar. I like the poetry style. ^^ - Report As Spam
- Dashami-Red-Priester - 09/06/2009
- That was beautiful.
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- Mecha anime_angel - 08/09/2009
- it is really a beautiful poem...it reminds me of my grandfather who just passed away
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- xXDarkDrowXx - 08/06/2009
- this is awesome!
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- qwertyasdfjkl12345 - 07/16/2009
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awsome! i think you should submit more poetry
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- AmandazzBtfl - 07/16/2009
- i really like it
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- Naked metal sheep - 07/12/2009
- what's it about
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