- Julious was running as fast as he could, however he could not remember what he was running from, he just knew he had to keep moving., As Julious looked ahead of himself he saw an opening with light coming from it, ‘Finally I am out of this place’ Julious thought to himself. When Julious ran out into the opening, what he saw brought a frown to his face; he was trapped in a maze! Julious saw he could only turn left or right, or he could go back, but something told him it wasn’t safe, Julious went with his gut and took a right, after running for hours, Julious saw something ahead of him that made his stomach turn, there in front of him was a dead human, but what turned Julious’s stomach wasn’t the dead human, its what was eating him, he saw what he thought was a demon, it was dark brown and wearing a single rag around its waste, Half its head was gone, where the brain should have been there was nothing but darkness, its eyes were pitch black, with just eye sockets and nothing in them, its skin was badly burned, and scared from many cuts, from its mouth protruded razor sharp teeth, three inches long, drool fell from its mouth as it made a gasping sound that reminded Julious of someone choking, it was using its nails, which looked like six inch razors, to pill the flesh from the human, one small strand at a time, Julious heard screaming, and it dawned on him that, the human wasn’t dead, the thing, whatever it was, was eating him alive! Julious saw the thing use its razor nails to slice the tongue from the human, so now when the human tried to scream, all that came out was blood spilling over his mouth, after it got finished sliding the tongue down its throat, he put one of its razor nails in one of the humans eyes, the human screamed and more blood spilled out of his mouth as the thing, whatever it was, pulled his eyeball from its socket cutting the dark red cords that bound the eye to its socket., the thing put the eyeball in his mouth and bit down, from out his mouth gushed white, and clear, liquid that came with a crunching sound, and then went back to work pilling the flesh from the human one strand at a time, Julious turned to run, but standing there was a lycan, big, Gray, and it leaned forward it maw wide open.
- Title: Julious
- Artist: St._Jimmy
- Description: Ive been writing this book for about 3 years now, and this is just a small section from it I wish to be rated, this is very detailed in my opinion, and it is the first book I started writing when being absolutely serious.
- Date: 02/22/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Galvatron - 02/25/2009
- Good one, Jimmy! I liked it.
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- LaTiNo LoPeZ - 02/23/2009
- nice
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