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I hear a knock on the door I wonder who it is maybe its Madison . I open the door and I can't beilieve my eyes it's Li Showron " Li" I wrap my arms around him giving him a giving him a huge hug " I've missed you Li "
"I've missed you too Sakura " Li looks at me with his beautiful eyes " I thought about you every day "
"oh LI " next thing I know his lips are on mine. We are kissing. I've waited so long for this. You see Li and I worked together to catch something called the clow cards once we got all of them LI was forced to leave, well not after we got them but after I turned them all into star cards. OH that reminds me " Guess what Li "
"What ? "
" I made a new star card "
Li gives me a confused look " What do you mean ? "
" I mean the hope card " I head towards the stairs " come I'll show you " I open my door and go over to my dresse where I take out the star book, I take out the top card " See it's the hope card when you left I was crying and the card appeared out of nowheres . Don't you find that weird? "
" Not really you are their master "
" Ya I guess, but I couldn,y have done it without you" This is true Li helped to with many of the clow cards "
" Don't forget Madison and Meilin "
" Yup they helped a lot too "My best friend Madison usally filmed me sealin the cards and Meilin would help fight them, we were kinda a foursome. " I miss Meilin "
" She misses you too "
Just then you phone rings I answer it :
" Hello it's madison "
"Oh hello Madison, Your never gonna guess who's in my room " I listen to a couple of guesses none of them right " No Li " I hear her drop the phone " Yup he showed up "
" Tell her to come over "
" ok, Hey Madison you should come over "
Madison knocks on the door about ten minutes later " Oh it really is you " Madison gives Li a hug " Only if Meilin was here "
I I know what you mean. It would be nice to have the gang back together again " It really would be. AT the begining it was just Madison, Li , and I but about half way though the journey Meilin joined in. Meilin and Li grew up together. AT first we were rivals but by the time she had to leave we were close friends .
TO BE CONTINUED !
- by Nanatsuiro-Rainbow |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/09/2009 |
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- Title: After The Clow Cards
- Artist: Nanatsuiro-Rainbow
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Description:
Ok this is a story about Sakura and Li from cardcaptor .
the love between them and their lives after the clow cards - Date: 03/09/2009
- Tags: after clow cards cardcaptor
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Sila Calien - 01/19/2010
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Please rate back ^^ i write short stories and poems
in need of criticism not praise ^^ plz tell me wat to improve - Report As Spam
- Sila Calien - 01/19/2010
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pretty gud though the english version always annoyed me
(how in the world did they make Tomoyo into Madison and Yukito into Julian 0.o never will understand)
and also its not Showron its Syaoran ^^ i know it looks weird but technically thats how its spelled. Pretty good writing but there are a few spelling and grammar errors
other than tat though gud job (luv ccs) 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Nanatsuiro-Rainbow - 05/10/2009
- ya after the first paragraph I got bored and didn't feel like writing !
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- Ethomara - 03/16/2009
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Tough critics?? I liked it but they are right you do need to spice it up a bit!!! Put more off your other stories on they are more interesting!!!!
Luv Megs - Report As Spam
- xXNowhere_in_sightXx - 03/11/2009
- ZzZzZ...
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- BiggieSmall123 - 03/09/2009
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/Emotionally detached/
All in all: 2/3
Could've been better.
Why couldnt you believe that it was Li? Were you suprised? Explain a little, describe some more, and have emotions in it.
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