- im in a closet heart beating sweat pouring down my chest then da door opens my heart falls to da floor a gun is pointed to my face sumthin in side ove me said let him shoot u and da otha tiny voice said shoot him nd den i faint...................
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- | Submitted on 04/08/2009 |
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- Title: in a closet
- Artist: xx-_iStay_Geeked_Up_-xx
- Description: my entry probably sucks but i like writin so i wrote dis hope ya enjoy P.S. see my otha poem life
- Date: 04/08/2009
- Tags: interests
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- I am a dedicated B2UTY - 10/13/2010
- It's really good and I get the idea but... You seriously need to check your grammar and spelling. And re-check and re-check. I'll give you a 2/5 for that...
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- xx-_iStay_Geeked_Up_-xx - 05/23/2009
- 4get yall hataz
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- laughing_shadow22 - 04/12/2009
- annoying, use correct spelling when writing...
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