- As they stalked out of camp they spotted Sparkclaw and Sparkfur comming back together from hunting. Sparkclaw sat down and signaled with her tail for the kits to come. Sparkfur smiled and picked up some of the prey they had caught and walked back into the camp. Sparkclaw looked around to see if anyone was there. "Okay, I have a little head start for you all. Your collecting Catnip right?" She meowed. "I am" mewed Nightkit. "Okay heres a little hint. You see that leaf over there?" She flicked her tail in the direction of the leaf. "That's huge!" He mewed in amazment." Under big patches of those leaves is tons of catnip! But you can only find catnip under those near where the kittypets live. Do you understand?" She meowed. Nightkit nodded and dipped his head towards her. "Who's collecting the supplies?"She meowed. "I am!" Firekit mewed. "Okay, over by the toleg company, you'll find tons of thngs you can use! But be warned. You have to cross onto the thunderclan territorry." Her mew grew lower as she spoke, as if someone was listening. She flicked her tail again for him to come closer. "Icefang and FrostFur already agreed to take you there. Don't tell Flamestar though...Understand?" her mew was brisk and serious. Firekit nodded. "Amberkit, I'm guessing your collecting prey? The best place for prey is down by the great oak tree. I'd suggest to take Speckletail with you. She knows the best place for prey around that area!" She meowed. Amberkit nodded and headded of back into the camp to find Speckletail. She searchedthe camp, looking behind all of the dens. She found her sitting outside of Flamestars den. Sitting patiently. "Can you help me hunt?" Amberkit mewed. "Of course! Just give me some time to talk to Flamestar." She meowed. "Okay!" Amberkit went to the nursery, slipping inside of her nest, and drifting off to sleep at her mothers side.
- by x Kyo Kakinsco x |
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- | Submitted on 06/07/2009 |
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- Title: Hunters- PART 5
- Artist: x Kyo Kakinsco x
- Description: PART 5 IS NOW OUT!!!!
- Date: 06/07/2009
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- x Kyo Kakinsco x - 06/18/2009
- That was messed up O_o... (Fixed) Windclan trembled before the fire of twolegs. FireHEART noticed Windclan when he had looked away from the roaring fire. Fireheart lept to his paws...... (fixed) Thanks for the advice
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- x Kyo Kakinsco x - 06/18/2009
- Cemera- Read past stories that has already been pointed out. Also it is not Copied from warrior series or else it would look like this ' Firestar and Graystripe walked into the grassy fields,Windclan before the fire of twolegs. They noticed with astonishment that that was Windclan. Firestar lept to his paws.....' THAT IS COPING ! (not exact but oh well) This is just based on cats and elements. I DON'T CARE IF IT'S LIKE WARRIORS FROM ERIN HUNTER! Light-Dark12- Thanx for the ad
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- Light-Dark12 - 06/12/2009
- It's a fanfic from the series Warriors. Maybe you've been getting 1/5 becuase it's confusing for people who don't know what's going on, there are a few grammar mistakes, but I'm not exactly sure why you've been getting row ratings. Try more detail...not so much talking too. Start off with that.
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- cemera - 06/12/2009
- .... u copied that from Warriors by Erin Hunter
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- x Kyo Kakinsco x - 06/08/2009
- O_o.... Okay. Why is it every time I put something in the arena the first rating FOR EVERYTHING!!! Is 1/5? Seriously. This is getting annoying. OKAY IF YOU WANT TO RATE MY STUFF AS HORRIBLE DON'T RATE AT ALL!
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