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the day the twins was a sad event. they came out perfect and healthy but no one knew the tragic incident that will come to be. there parents had given birth to two beautiful baby girls. who grew into beautiful girls then teens. they named the
Cecil and Clair
the girls grew up a happy life. in a huge house. both parents happy. and by the country away from civilization. they had friends. and boy friends. one night they were very hyper so they went to the lake. there was a full moon out. the girls had no idea what awaited them. when they reached the lake a tall man was straining into the lake. Cecil's blond hair waved in the hot breeze. he turned at smiled at the girls. "why hello there" he greeted them. they looked confused. "hello" Clair said twirling a piece or strawberry blond hair in her fingers. "oh dont mind me" he told them "im just here to see the water dwellers." they gaped at him. "water what" Cecil asked. "come watch." the girls stood next to him and starred at the water. as they watched they saw the bottom of the water begin to move. "what is it" Clair asked "mermaids" he told them. they starred at him in disbelief. as they watched the lake began to glow.
they started to see them. they were very pretty. Clair pulled out her cell phone "its getting late we should go" Clair said. "you cant leave now" he told them. fear stricken the girls froze "w-what do you mean" Cecil manged to say "one of you must stay or both" Clair felt her self raise her hand. "very well enter the lake" he told her. but Cecil wouldn't let her go. "both of you in the water. they did as he told them. "now you must touch one of the mermaids and you shale be cursed to stay here" he told them. they jumped into the water. right away they saw a mermaid she was very pretty. she held out her hand for them to grab. at the same time they grabbed her hand. their feet became fins. their lungs gills. a feeling over whelmed them both. they were trapped as mermaids] forever.
- by miss B R I G H T |
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- | Submitted on 06/08/2009 |
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- Title: the cursed twins
- Artist: miss B R I G H T
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- Date: 06/08/2009
- Tags: cursed twins
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Comments (5 Comments)
- ify11 - 02/22/2010
- The story is not as eye-catching as the pictures
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- Akira_shizike - 06/08/2009
- im just not feeling it.i give it a one.
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- xoxMrsSasukeUchihaxox - 06/08/2009
- whoa
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- XxInnocent-FearxX - 06/08/2009
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I loved how you put the pictures up but I'm really sorry...
It just didn't work...
You need to describe them more of what they look like...
I'll give you a 5 since you went into the problem of finding pics and putting the up....
But next time....more description!
(you can use the pics as well ) - Report As Spam
- NatureRocks411 - 06/08/2009
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Honestly.... too much pictures and not enough story telling...
Instead of using pictures to show how the chaacters look, try describing how the teenagers were supposed to look. ^^; - Report As Spam