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As the towns people run and cower.
the shadow begins to devour.
Their skin turns to ashes as he lashes,
he shoved many poeple in a crate.
You could hear there body's crack and
break.
As the blood rushed out the sides of
the crate.
One girl screamed"Leave my poeple be"
the shadow let out a big screech.
She fell to her knee's and held her ears portecting,
them from the terrible screech.
The shadow stretched out his hand all over the land
all the dead people even if sand got up and
began toward the girl.
She got up an ran but was
cornered.
She fell to her knee's and cowered, but the shadow
did not devour for the dead wanted flesh.
She dashed but when did was slashed,she fell to the
ground holding her throat and beginning to choke.
A boy was smiling as her blood covered the street her
heart stoped beating.
The end ^ ^
- by XxKyleeKaresxX |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/22/2009 |
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- Title: Shadow
- Artist: XxKyleeKaresxX
- Description: it was a random thing that i wrote so yea fill free to say anything cuz i really have no idea what its like i think its pretty bad but what ever
- Date: 06/22/2009
- Tags: shadow
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Shadow of the Light9283 - 07/03/2009
- kind of demented, but okay
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- Pravus Angelus - 06/30/2009
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You should probably put this in poetry and lyrics instead of fiction.
A bit sing-songy for my taste, but overall it was good. - Report As Spam