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Iwoke up in a very dim room. Like i alwase do but this time it was different like more people are in it. Then the light turns on
i look araound my self and there are houndreds no thousands of people straped to C4.
COMENT ON MY PRO IF YOU WANT ME TO WIRGHT MORE
(or if you want the whole store)
- by the real -no-idea-24- |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/24/2009 |
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- Title: the secrets of the dark cutter
- Artist: the real -no-idea-24-
- Description: i rote this during the school year ^_^ hope you like it
- Date: 06/24/2009
- Tags: secrets dark cutter
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Comments (2 Comments)
- LexyCobriana - 06/26/2009
- I agree. Seriously, that is nothing to go off of. You have to have enough to peak or curiosity. Why would we ask you for more, when we dont' know what we would be asking for?
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- LeeEyeLa - 06/25/2009
- Well first of all, this is NOT enough to base a rating off of. This is two tiny little paragraphs. If you want to be a good writer, you have to write more than a few sentences and ask for critique. And learn how to spell, please.
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