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I was amazed when my eyes laid its sight to this wonderful place. I was in the beach, the crystal blue water, clean white sand, salty scent of the sea, and the cool breeze. And to make things more perfect the beautiful girl sitting there silently. I didn’t expect that this place would be this wonderful; I thought everything was in darkness and the spotlight was only to her. But this side was so different; it almost feels like the real thing. On my other side of the barrier I could only smell and feel things but all I can see is darkness. I was lost with my thoughts and with this place, until I saw something moved, the girl has raised her head and looked straight at me. Her expression was not surprised as if she was waiting for me. I was dumbfounded when I saw her beautiful and yet tired eyes. My heart starts to pound fast as I looked at her, but it breaks my heart to see her sad. I wanted to go near her and gently touch her angelic face. Then gently whisper to her ears that, everything’s going to be fine, she’s safe with me because I wouldn’t let anyone hurt her. But my legs won’t let me move. And at that moment I realized that I am here to protect her from something. My heart starts to pound even faster as I raised my head and saw the monster behind her. My eyes were on fire as I saw this thing behind her, I could feel my strength flowing back to me, and I was coming into a rage. I felt the urge to protect her. With fist balled tightly and the willingness of my heart to protect her, I ran towards the monster.
I SWEAR TO GOD I’LL PROTECT HER!
Then a loud growl covered the place.
~to be continued …
- by RockPunkPrince |
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- | Submitted on 07/05/2009 |
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- Title: Trapped (Part 11)
- Artist: RockPunkPrince
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have you ever been trapped in you own dream? your own world? somewhere anything can happen ...
~please read the first parts, first :)
pls. rate ill accept any criticism i know im not that good with writing yet tell me any suggestions anything to make it more interesting :D - Date: 07/05/2009
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Comments (6 Comments)
- RockPunkPrince - 06/20/2010
- got the account back smile
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- 1RockPunkPrince5 - 05/13/2010
- this account has been hacked sad
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- M0NST3R iiN Y0UR B3D - 05/06/2010
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Its very cute! I loved it alot, and wish you will continue your work!
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- blackman556 - 07/05/2009
- loovve ittt a lot its very heroic
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- blackman556 - 07/05/2009
- pls. rate ill accept any criticism i know im not that good with writing yet tell me any suggestions anything to make it more interesting biggrin i copied this. u need to stop doing this we"ll all like it, not one of ur stories has not been rated
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- lucky marianna - 07/05/2009
- It's still romantic.The most intersting part of the story I think but you cut it t the best! biggrin
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