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http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w233/x0Shinigami0x/Anime/Anime%20Females/3ff45_0011.jpg[/IMG]]photobucket.com if this picture shows up it is what you look like
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk39/hnanimegrl88/brown%20hair%20girls/9456c236.jpg[/IMG]]photobucket.com and if this one shows up its what Carlie looks like
your name is sam demita. you live in new york city. your parents died we you were little and by the way you are 13. you live with your best friend, carlie frank. she is also 13 and her parents also died, but she had her sister.you had no one. your birthday is on june 5. you like to sped time on the internet and talk to the pen pal you've had since 3rd grade. you dont know is real name but his username is wolfwolf32. your username is atisami. (thats last 3 letters in your last name backwards and your nick name) you get B's in school but hate your teachers. sound ok? yup! (have a cookie!) whatever sucks (then leave!)
you were walking home from school with carlie and you deccided to go straigt home while se went shopping. you felt like somene was beind you. nobody was there. (by the way you arent shy at all except around boys excluting your pen pal. you could talk to him for weeks but if any other boy talked to you would most likely pass out) you walked faster anyway. you took a short cut throuh an allyway. you heard a click. you turned. there was a gun in your face. "gimme your bag!" a guy said. you gave it to him. he looked through it and took out your laptop and cell phone. he stabbed you in the stomache with a knife and began to run. you saw him get tackled by a kid probally not much older than you. another kid came up to you. it was a boy probaly about your age. "are you ok?" he asked. you felt dizzy. you were passing out. you tried you talk but only murmmered "i cant..." and passed out from shock. you woke up in the hospital. you looked around. you realized were and tried to run out of the room but fell back down. your stomache hurt badly. "AH! OWOWOW!" you yelled. some one rushed to your side. "laydown! you got stabbed and cant reopen your wounds!" you heard a boy about 13 say. "what...what happend?" you asked. "some one was stealing your laptop and cellphone and stabbed you and we took you to the hospital after we beat him up" the boy said. "that was you?" you asked. "yes. my friend and i saw that guy following you so we followed him" you heard another boy's voice say. "thank you." you said. "your welcome. is there anything you need?" the first one asked. "um... can i have my laptop?" you asked. "sure. here" he said. he gave it to you. you thanked him and turned it on. you began to tell your pen pal everything.
wolfwolf32:are you ok? what do you mean you got stabbed?
atisami: please calm down! i dont no how bad but it hurts. 2 boys saved me.
wolfwolf32: 2 boys? who? what are their names? did they make you pass out?
atisami: i dont know thier names. i just woke up. and i did pass out but not because of them.
wolfwolf32:are u sure ur ok?
atisami:IM IN THE FREAKING HOSPITAL! HELL NO! I.HATE.DOCTERS! I.HATE.NEEDLES! GET ME OUT!
wolfwolf:eep! srry! if i knew what hospital i would come see you but you dont even know do you?
atisami: no i dont. srry. i dont feel good. ill talk to you when i get info k?
wolfwolf32: ok. if you dont tell me anything you know ill kill you my self! lol!
atisami:lol. bye
wolfwolf32: bye.
you turned off the computer and held it out. one of the boys took it. "well sami. you are going to be ok?" the docter walked into the room. "urm.. excuse me but... what are you boys doing in here?" the docter asked. "dont make them leave!" you said. "im sorry but the have to. i have to check your injery and they have to leave the room for that" the female docter said. "ok but first, um... what is your name?'' you asked the boy who was holding your laptop. "name? its Damien" he said. the boys left the room. the docter told you to take of tour shirt so she could check your cut. "well. sam. you wont be walking until this is healed but ill let you go home tomarrow." she said. "thank you" you said. you did hate docters but this one reminded you of your mom so she didnt scare you. "alright. Damien, Tristan, you may come in now" the docter said. you heard the door open then close. "excuse me, but can we-" you heard a person say but the door was shut in his face. "man, why are there so many reporters?" the other boy who was Tristan, said. "you mean you dont know?'' the docter asked. "um.. all we did was beat that guy to a pulp." Tristain said. "exactly. that man was a criminal that they have been tring to catch for over 6 years. he killed 2 couples at a party 6 years ago and orphaned 2 children. he also killed at least 10 cops that were tring to get him and was put in the hospital by 2 13 year olds" she said. this caught your attentin. 6 years ago you and carlie's parents died at a party. "who was the guy?" you asked. "he was Carlos Tomson" the docter said. that WAS the same guy who killed your parents. Damien was sitting next to you on the hospital bed. you hugged him. "that was the same man who killed me and carlie's parents! you would not belive how greatful i am to you!" you said crying. "ah...ow! can you..please stop? your...crushing me!" Damien said. you yelped in pain. you reopend your cut. you started to bleed on him and on yourself. you layed down again and the nurse kicked the two of them out again so she could re bandage you. "alright. come back in" she said once she had finished. they came back in and shut the door. "next time can we just turn around? the reporters swarm us everytime we go out side and they are annoying" Tristan said. "alright. but you have to close your eyes because of the mirror got it?" the docter said. "alright. if you need anything that these two cant get you, use the call button" the docter said leaving the room. "um... can i see what you both look like? i didnt see your faces" you said. "ok." they said. Damien had unnaturaly blue hair and he had bright blue eyes and Tristain had fire engine red hair and red eyes. woah. they're cute. you thought and blacked out again.
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if you want the rest of the story just say so by commenting on my profile!
- by HaiiroKitsune32 |
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- | Submitted on 07/07/2009 |
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- Title: Shapeshifting chapter 1
- Artist: HaiiroKitsune32
- Description: this is chapter 1 of my shapeshifting story. if you like it i can send you the rest of it you just have to comment on my profile and tell me you want the rest but i might not answer right away because sometimes i dont go on for a few days.
- Date: 07/07/2009
- Tags: shapeshifting story
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ii applebottomjeans ii - 01/24/2011
- i agree its easier to read if put into first or third person but still! great job and keep on writing!
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- HaiiroKitsune32 - 07/13/2009
- i wrote this one over 2 months ago. im working on 17 now
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- MakeMeWonder566 - 07/12/2009
- Maybe put it into 1st person but other than that great job!
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- KingdomHeartsfan98 - 07/07/2009
- hey sis!
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